One tip is make your story pleasing on the eye with slightly larger font size and Smaller paragraphs so the reader does not lose track of where they...
I watched Hurricane Heist here in London and have to admit the filming of the hurricane sequences were well done, the story plot was half believable...
I have similar problems, only mine is much more personal, i write on my main PC in my living room and have done for years, since retiring early, but...