View Full Version : Surrender

12-15-2006, 11:54 PM
I gaze deeply into your eyes
And I can see your very soul
The hidden passions you have
So long suppressed

I touch your cheek
And feel you tremble
And I know you desire
To be touched

My lips graze your lips
And you catch your breath
And I know your need
That you have kept hidden

My tongue touches yours
And the sparks seem to fly
My arms tighten and
Pull you closer to me

I feel you surrender
Yourself to me
As you unleash your hunger
And desires and are finally free

Free to be you and
Not have to pretend
Free to speak out
And finally feel

No longer hiding
Behind words or things
But open and honest
For whatever life brings

Knowing no matter what
Your do or say
I will be by your side
And never go away

You are surrounded
By my love to use as a shield
It is stronger than steel and
Will never yield

For anything to hurt you
It first must go thru me
Because my love is open
For all the world to see

I now share your burdens
Your joys and hope
And together there is no
Problems which we can not cope

Your tears are mine
To kiss away
As you rush into my arms
Without delay

You sleep in my arms
And together we are strong
For now you know it is
In my arms you belong

12-16-2006, 03:50 AM
That is awesome....you write some romantic stuff there Jolly.....Thanks

12-16-2006, 04:54 AM
Amazingly beautiful

06-24-2007, 10:54 PM
that poem reached out and touched something deep inside my soul...almost as if you were there or knew me already, Jolly1....that was beautifully written..

06-24-2007, 11:20 PM
Dam Jolly, I had no idea you had to poet in your soul. Very well done. Very well done indeed. :)

08-03-2007, 01:55 PM
Dam Jolly, I had no idea you had to poet in your soul. Very well done. Very well done indeed. :)

ahhh I have many hidden talents ---known only to those who know me well ---