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freedom
01-06-2007, 08:24 PM
Sometimes the life makes the best material for writing...not always a good thing but hell that's life I guess. Enjoy...

Pain like I’ve never felt,
Tears pour down like rain,
Pain not only emotional but physical,
My chest hurting with it.
Unable to stop the tears,
Pulling up wall I thought gone for good.
Feeling things I thought I’d never feel again.
Steel surrounding my heart,
Keeping everyone out,
Can’t let them see me fall,
No one can see me on my knees.
Screaming and wailing to the sky,
Unable to control the pain.
Losing all control for the first time.
The pain of being used,
The pain of being an object of “lust”
Knowing the truth of life,
If you truly love someone,
You don’t “lust” after anyone else.
Knowing that even that explanation …is a lie.
You took my love,
Twisted it and used it,
Taking advantage of my feelings,
Using me because you knew,
Knew I would give you the world,
Anything to make you happy.
Even if it was unintentional…
The pain still remains.
As I watch you, dream of you, think of you,
Unable to unlove you.

davesmistress
01-07-2007, 01:02 AM
*sigh*......I feel ya my friend...that was deep......Big (hug).....

freedom
01-07-2007, 01:20 AM
Thanks...glad you liked it

ADavid
01-07-2007, 02:13 AM
Wow, that one was very well done freedom. well done my friend

freedom
01-07-2007, 08:11 AM
Thank you..but I wish I had never had to write it guys

davesmistress
01-07-2007, 01:57 PM
*sigh*....I know you do...:(

ADavid
01-07-2007, 02:47 PM
Yea I know you do.. :(

Jolly1
01-07-2007, 04:13 PM
Wow that touched my very soul ---thanks love :jo

freedom
01-07-2007, 11:00 PM
it came from my soul....thanks Jolly

indian aviator
07-27-2011, 08:17 AM
my god. real heart wrenching.brought me to tears.

freedom
07-30-2011, 01:48 AM
I'm glad you felt something from it, I did when I wrote it but luckily that pain has healed :D

Brigit Astar
04-25-2012, 05:30 PM
A powerful poem. Vey effective.

freedom
04-26-2012, 07:05 PM
Thank you :)

ruskinoman
09-14-2012, 04:15 PM
Хороший ответ, только напишите более подробнее.

Brigit Astar
09-27-2012, 10:02 PM
Sometimes the life makes the best material for writing...not always a good thing but hell that's life I guess. Enjoy...

Pain like I’ve never felt,
Tears pour down like rain,
Pain not only emotional but physical,
My chest hurting with it.
Unable to stop the tears,
Pulling up wall I thought gone for good.
Feeling things I thought I’d never feel again.
Steel surrounding my heart,
Keeping everyone out,
Can’t let them see me fall,
No one can see me on my knees.
Screaming and wailing to the sky,
Unable to control the pain.
Losing all control for the first time.
The pain of being used,
The pain of being an object of “lust”
Knowing the truth of life,
If you truly love someone,
You don’t “lust” after anyone else.
Knowing that even that explanation …is a lie.
You took my love,
Twisted it and used it,
Taking advantage of my feelings,
Using me because you knew,
Knew I would give you the world,
Anything to make you happy.
Even if it was unintentional…
The pain still remains.
As I watch you, dream of you, think of you,
Unable to unlove you.

a powerful poem

crzy67
09-28-2012, 06:24 AM
Great read. Very good work.