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freedom
02-20-2007, 08:36 AM
I try to close myself off,
Keep from loving you,
But the way you tease,
Makes me linger.
It's like I'm balancing on a knife blade.
Slipping in any direction,
Possibly fatal.
Broken heart on one side,
Unbreakable love on the other.
You say we can't,
You say you won't,
Yet on you go,
Pulling at my heart.
Just being with you enough,
Not needing physical things.
The connection of our hearts enough,
To fill my life with joy.
The strongest relationships,
Start as friends.
But my fragile heart,
I put in your hands,
Yours to keep,
For as long as you want it,
But if you give it back,
Be gentle with it,
My love for you,
All that holds it together.
The pieces all but dust,
Stupid things I wish,
That I could undo,
But if I did,
I might never of found you.
Might never have kissed your soft lips,
Never have felt your sweet touch.
Now I couldn't imagine my life,
Without you in it somehow.
Friend, brother or lover,
You fill a need in my heart,
A want in my soul.
When you're near,
It's like I'm complete,
But when you're gone,
Part of me is missing.
My thoughts and dreams,
They are filled with you,
Gifts from God,
Filling me with hope.
Praying for the future,
Trying to keep my faith,
Hoping God will move you,
To love me,
As I love you.

davesmistress
02-20-2007, 08:40 AM
WOW wonderful Gal...thanks for sharing that....;)

ADavid
02-21-2007, 04:04 AM
WOW thanx sweetheart, Thanx for sharing these with us.

Sexy_Minx
03-05-2007, 10:34 AM
i dont know much about writing poetry and/or critiquing poetry so i wont say much except that i thought it was awsome! it reminded me of a past experience i had and how i felt about someone who ended up breaking my heart....


keep writing! you have a fan here :D

freedom
03-05-2007, 11:52 AM
Thanks Sexy_Minx...I appreciate