View Full Version : For your consideration

03-16-2007, 06:50 AM
Oh well, if the section exists, why not post something on it, it's been too long since I have. Too busy now I'm back in classes :P Or, you know...too drunk/high/lazy. All valid excuses, no? Anyway, for your consideration and delectation, two poems.


Surreally slashing slivers,
Silvered shining shards a-falling,
Down to the waiting earth,
The weighted waiting earth a-calling,
Opened sky with rainbow forming,
Sun over dark clouds a-dawning,
Glimmering beauty from the sky descending,
Flashing glory this dark world adorning.

Hurtful Healing
(A horrific title, so suggestions are welcome)

That, enamored with your light
I might fall a willing, blissful victim
To the darkness within you-
A darkness which I meet with equal love

That is the greatest gift of my life,
Fate’s only sweet soft kiss for one
Who has been acquainted with the night
And I shall meet, fearless, the muse of my soul

To be consumed and made whole.

If you're really interested, try my devart profile http://nminuspi.deviantart.com

03-16-2007, 07:03 AM
very nicely done...thanks

03-16-2007, 01:22 PM
Very well done. thanx for sharing