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freedom
06-03-2007, 09:28 PM
I sit and think of how much time we missed.
Thinking of all the things I wish you'd been there for.
The times in my life that I needed you.
Seeing me get married,
Watching me grow,
Seeing my success in life.
I know in my heart the you are proud.
But there are times I wish I could hear you say it.
Times that I wonder what my life would be like,
If you'd been there for me.
I know you would have stayed if you could.
I know the pain you were in was great.
I am jealous because now,
God has you forever,
And I hardly got you at all.
But I know we will be reunited.
One glad day,
I will meet both my fathers.
As much as I love God,
I love you more.
See you soon!

davesmistress
06-03-2007, 11:32 PM
Beautiful Freedom......Thanks

SecretScribe
08-23-2007, 07:36 AM
Thank you ... that was so much from the heart ... and to the heart.

jaguar
08-23-2007, 07:52 AM
That was beautiful, my lady.
You really have a gift with words to make someone feel what you mean.

freedom
08-23-2007, 08:01 AM
glad you all liked it

wizardwriter
08-23-2007, 08:12 AM
Very nice freedom,
very touching,
even to a barbarian,
Wizard

Kristin
08-23-2007, 11:23 AM
Aww... I love it, Freedom!!
I lost a nephew few years back, and your writing - especially "I am jealous now, because God has you forever", describes how I feel when thinking of him :(
He died in a car accident, speeding, drinking, drugs involved.. he wa merely a passenger - all 3 of them died at the age of 18... I miss him so much

freedom
08-24-2007, 07:36 AM
I had a cousin that died in a car wreck at 18 but there was no alcohol or anything involved...driver fell asleep...sad stuff...glad you liked it

g00ber
08-27-2007, 01:32 PM
and you say your not good at the peotic stuff. your right, you are great

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-28-2007, 12:50 AM
that was beautiful. just feel like giving you a big hug after reading it

freedom
08-28-2007, 05:26 AM
ok guys you're going to give me the big head

g00ber
08-29-2007, 11:46 AM
lol would you like the 'big head'

g00ber
08-29-2007, 11:46 AM
sorry couldnt resist

freedom
08-30-2007, 05:37 AM
lol...dork

Nightwater
09-06-2007, 06:46 AM
Hopefully not too soon. Your life makes ours more poetic. Thanks!

freedom
09-06-2007, 07:05 AM
thanks Nightwater

emilyleanne
11-10-2008, 07:18 AM
thank you that was lovely i lost my father 2 months ago in september so the words touch me xxx

jaguar
11-10-2008, 07:29 AM
so sad to hear emilyleanne.

emilyleanne
11-10-2008, 07:30 AM
ty jaguar xx

jaguar
11-10-2008, 07:42 AM
you're more than welcome e.l. xox
(as I wipe away the tear that comes of remembrance)