View Full Version : Whirlpool of Darkness

06-14-2007, 02:43 PM
The weight of my thoughts pulls at me,
I think of all the bad and forget the good,
The pain, the heartache,
They consume the person I once was,
Leaving me an empty shell.
My heart and mind wondering what will be.
Too much pain,
All I see is the down side,
I try with all my heart and soul,
To find the light,
And climb from this dark abyss.
But as I grasp for the edge,
The pain of my loneliness
Pulls my back into the darkness,
Which has become as a whirlpool,
Pulling me deeper with every stroke I take,
Losing strength, losing faith
As deeper into the darkness I fall.
The weight of the pain,
Crushing my heart in my chest.
Taking the person that I was,
Making me something else,
Something that doesn’t know,
How to feel,
How to love,
How to care,
How to be me.
It all seems to fade,
Into the darkness,
As I fall all alone,
With no one to save me.

06-14-2007, 02:53 PM
Very Lovely...and also quite sad....Thanks Freedom

06-14-2007, 03:02 PM
thanks DM