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SecretScribe
08-22-2007, 07:26 AM
Would that my dreams were filled with you
Visions of loveliness and the things I’d do
To your body and more to your soul
I’d bring you ecstasy; I’d make you whole.

But my nightly dreams are filled with dark
Haunting visions and landscapes stark.
It’s only by day that I see your grace
And I can envision your sweet embrace.

Save me, love, bring me peace.
Bring to me sweet surcease.
I beg of you to give me nights
Where I only see thy sweet delights.

davesmistress
08-22-2007, 07:31 AM
Very lovely...thanks for the addition

freedom
08-22-2007, 07:33 AM
wonderful...I love it

Kristin
08-22-2007, 08:23 AM
Oh! A poet!
That sure is a lovely poem - you made it? Very good! I write some stuff myself, butmy poems are all in Norwegian - and translating them only make them.... weird... haha

wizardwriter
08-22-2007, 08:35 AM
hiya Kristin-
Norwegian stuff is hot-
Secret great post-
not much for poetry, but I've been expanding my borders-
Barbarian poetry
Whack, whack!
you're mine,
let's go-

Wizard

Kristin
08-22-2007, 10:14 AM
Haha - I love that, Wiz! You know, being grabbed by the hair simply awakes those primal needs in me....