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freedom
08-24-2007, 07:48 AM
Posting some of my older stuff...hope you like

My mind dreams and twirls,
Thoughts and hopes.
Feelings all mixed up.
Thousands of emotions all fighting for control.
My heart pulled apart.
Not sure how to feel,
Afraid to care.
Worried about rejection.
Pounding heart, quick breaths.
Putting voice to my thoughts.
Words crushing my world.
Walls climbing, protecting and hiding,
Never to fall.
No more pain, no more cares,
Push it away.
Don't let it be felt.
Keep yourself strong my heart screams.
If you feel you will fall.
Protect yourself.
Cold hearted and cruel.
The only way to survive.
Don't worry about anything,
Act like you don't care.
Keep it bottled up.
Let it swell,
Harden your heart,
Never be soft.
Briars and brambles,
To keep your cares away

jaguar
08-24-2007, 08:28 AM
I really wish you didn't feel that way, makes my heart break my lady.....

davesmistress
08-24-2007, 08:57 AM
Thanks for the adition

wizardwriter
08-24-2007, 09:42 AM
Ah, the Morticia era,
nice job, your darkness,
wizard

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-27-2007, 08:33 AM
very nice

g00ber
08-27-2007, 01:30 PM
dark thoughts indeed, but good none the less

freedom
08-28-2007, 05:22 AM
goober knows not my dark and stormy past...lol

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-28-2007, 05:25 AM
neither do i for that matter...

have you ever concidered entering poetry comps (not on this site that is)?

freedom
08-28-2007, 05:46 AM
yes I had one published by dogma publishing but nothing huge...I've been trying though

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-28-2007, 06:51 AM
ah cool. well good luck with submissions, they are really good

emilyleanne
11-08-2008, 05:45 AM
freedom this poem is so me but i have met a wounderfull man who is bit by bit helping me take down the wall i put up around me thank you xxxxxx

bigizzy
11-10-2008, 06:06 PM
I love that poem, thank you