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08-27-2007, 09:19 AM
found one, and it is an oldie from 98 o.O


I have never experienced pain like this
Life degenerating, vanishing before my eyes
Darkness surrounding, conquering my fears
Is this a dream? It shure as hell feels real
Searching the void, trying to register something, anything
But nothing

My hand touches something hard
But I still see nothing
I try to grab, but now it's gone
Feeling hot and cold in random cycles
Waiting, longing, freaking, suspended in this void
Grasping nothing

I try to see my body
But only just registering my hands and feet
But they are slowly disappearing
Call for help but hear nothing
But sound doesn't exist in the void
Only nothing

My body disappears completely
Out of the void comes a mirror
I can only see the glowing orb that is my soul
Then the mirror fades to black
But I remain, only existing, just living
I am nothing

08-27-2007, 09:26 AM
Wow I like that...thanks

Keep these in mind for our next poetry contest

08-27-2007, 01:18 PM
quite a few of mine are actually song lyrics, are they okay to put in the poetry section? (no music to them actually, except this one which i need to find the music for :/ )

08-27-2007, 01:34 PM
that was reaaly good, well done kiljoy

08-28-2007, 05:09 AM
putting them here is fine....great stuff Kiljoy