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freedom
08-29-2007, 08:08 AM
My emotions so locked away,
As your words,
Blow my heart away.
You're lost to us,
No more time,
No more chances.
Your feelings,
Always did I suspect.
Knowing you was wonderful,
Finding out about your feelings,
A blow to my heart.
For when I found out,
You were gone.
Lost to us,
A light extinguished.
Never did I dream,
That you could love me.
Never did I think,
That you would ever see me,
As someone you could love.
The words were like a knife,
You were gone,
And it was too late.
To late to tell you,
That I cared,
To late to tell you,
How wonderful you were.
To late to stop the tears,
To late to stop the pain.
All though we could never have been,
You were a dear friend,
In my heart you'll remain,
Forever etched in my memory.

davesmistress
08-29-2007, 08:12 AM
Lovely Freedom...thanks

freedom
08-29-2007, 08:25 AM
Thanks DM

jaguar
08-29-2007, 08:25 AM
That's magnificent, should be published, it touched me.....

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-29-2007, 08:31 AM
that was beautiful. about Jolly was it?

freedom
08-29-2007, 08:34 AM
wasn't about anyone really....just something I felt inclined to write...glad you liked it though

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-29-2007, 08:46 AM
ah. just the feeling behind it seemed i guess. and of course i liked it, your poetry is excellent

g00ber
08-29-2007, 03:17 PM
damned near brought a tear to me eyes, as beautiful as you freedom.

wizardwriter
08-29-2007, 03:50 PM
Freedom- as always a lovely piece, enough said-
keep up the good work
KJ- stop being rude, you don't ask about such things-

Badlybent
08-29-2007, 07:02 PM
Your poetry is touching Freedom. I can tell it's from the heart because it has heart.

freedom
08-30-2007, 05:47 AM
Thank you everyone