View Full Version : Fare Affair

08-31-2007, 01:56 AM
*** Be aware this is short, and hopefully sweet enough. ;) I might start fiddling with a second meeting perhaps. With more in it.. ***

And.. onto the story.



The taxi pulled up, the door opened and the woman climbed out, soft black pants clinging nicely over her legs, topped with a soft grey shirt, a delicate hand ran through thick blonde curls as she opened her small chic black bag and pulled out her small black leather wallet, opening it she fished out the cab fare, and paid the driver.

His soft blue eyes trailed over her slowly, his mind skipping back slightly, only 20 minutes ago he'd picked her up off the corner. Off a main street down town, she had climbed into the back of his cab and he almost stuttered when he spoke.

"Where you want to go, Miss?" His voice softened, seeming slightly different to him, more surreal. He'd seen in the review mirror the slightest cant of her head to one side, thick blonde hair tumbling as she moved. Her voice honey sweet as she'd given her address. He'd given her a nod, and turned his eyes to the road, putting his foot to the gas peddle, the cab had merged into traffic.

He figured he was lucky indeed when he glanced back in the mirror and saw what he thought he had seen, the beautiful woman in the back of his cab, one delicate hand curved down between her thighs, as she touched herself softly though the material. His eyes had darted to her face, as he saw her staring out the window. He wondered who she was thinking of, if it was some lover and the anticipation of the touch of his strong arms about her, the feel of his skin next to hers.

He gave a blink looking back to the road hurriedly, checking that all was fine. He'd been driving cabs a long, long time now. Well the last five years had certainly felt longer than merely five years. He stopped his musing as he glanced back, her hand was still there, still softly moving, her lips he noticed were just slightly parted. Just slightly.

He looked back to the road, turning down a street and carefully guiding his cab to the address given. He didn't want this fare to end, but he didn't want to charge her too much. He figured this one wouldn’t know how much it might cost, so he kept driving a while longer, every now and again looking back, to only see her had touching a little quicker. The next glance, and the next street, quicker. Her chest moving slightly, delicately rising and falling, he felt more than a little aroused.

He almost groaned out loud, but managed to keep himself in check as he drove. He shifted slightly in his seat, her head was tilted slightly back when he glanced again. The back windows of his cab were tinted, it was some kind of new fad you could say. Something to give the clients more privacy as you take them from place to place. He knew this woman was enjoying it, as her eyes closed subtly, as her fingers stroked ever faster. She had remained silent the whole time so far, her chest lifting and falling a little quicker.

He turned another street, mentally assessing it was another two blocks, not long. But glancing back, he figured that was all she needed by the slightly flushed but tense expression on that dainty beautiful face. As his eyes drifted down over her again, her fingers kneaded in slightly, her lower lip slowly trembling. Parting her thighs just a little, then closing them back as her entire body softly shuddered.

He glanced back to the road, and turned down the final street, her street. Slowing slightly to weave about cars as he finally pulled up in front of the destination. He looked in the rear view mirror. If he hadn’t seen it, he wouldn‘t have known it happened. The only hint being a slight flush to her cheeks.

The taxi stopped, the door opened, and the woman climbed out. Soft black pants clinging nicely over her legs, topped with a soft gray shirt. A delicate hand ran through thick blonde curls, as she opened her small chic black bag and pulled out her small black leather wallet. Opening it she fished out the cab fare, and paid the driver.

His soft blue eyes trailed over her slowly, as she headed up the walkway and through the gate. The cabbie drove off, slightly shaking his head, with a smile on his face.

08-31-2007, 02:27 AM
wow that was very nice...had a very good visual to it...Thanks

08-31-2007, 04:33 AM
yes indeed very good visuals
thanks for the submission
looking for more

08-31-2007, 04:40 AM
Hehe, well thankyou. I think on that, I'll certainly consider finishing a rework of something else I have and putting it up.

~ Muse.

08-31-2007, 05:17 AM
That was great thanks for sharing it.

11-04-2007, 05:08 PM
From your writing, you are a clever one aren't you Muse? Nice job, that was a very cool read. Thx

11-04-2007, 06:05 PM
Seems everyone has said all there is to say about this great piece of fictional writing.... Keep up the great work and please post more.

11-21-2007, 03:16 AM
Very well told and I can appreciate the style of writing. Where you can read along and be part of the story - it just flows. Thank you.. that was great...

11-21-2007, 01:29 PM
short but very good

11-21-2007, 11:03 PM
very good story
keep em cumming