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cum4me
10-02-2007, 11:10 PM
It's all in my face,
anger without a trace;
is life caught or caught to a case?
But evil resides to the side of the weak;

stay place stays behind your face and leaks out your eyes,
only to find deception of a lie
repenting acceptance of salvation;
gave up soul without a try,
the sensation of being out of control gets you high;
abolition of a sin, taking a toll on your mind,
breaking patients from a hole in the sky.

Why ask why? Live in the past of those who die
true as our as you want to last,
but in the end,
life live to die comes too fast

davesmistress
10-02-2007, 11:18 PM
Interesting....thanks for the addition...;)

cum4me
10-02-2007, 11:34 PM
thanks again

Scorpio'sWill2Power
10-17-2007, 08:34 PM
Another fine showing of skill with translation of
thought to written word.

No mincing of words as the work gets right
to the heart of things emotionally.

freedom
10-17-2007, 10:40 PM
Very nice....keep up the good work

cum4me
10-18-2007, 01:37 AM
thanks again for reading Im glad you guys like it

niteowluk2003
10-18-2007, 07:58 AM
Don't normally read poetry but glad I did this one....well done

cum4me
10-22-2007, 07:49 PM
thank you