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cum4me
10-02-2007, 11:12 PM
Everything twisted in so many directions
mind images pulled and divided into sections
through poetry I try to show my affection
but word not powerfull enough to explain how I feel
it seems simpil but to plain to reviel
girl understand what you give through love can heal
the most deadly wounds tempted by gun even depression
scary but love falls and turns to obsession
but who wouldn't love to obsess perfection
so my heart is forever pulled into your direction

davesmistress
10-02-2007, 11:16 PM
Nice...thanks for that

cum4me
10-02-2007, 11:33 PM
thank you for reading it

Scorpio'sWill2Power
10-17-2007, 08:29 PM
Very powerful imagery conveyed with
the words.

I like your style very much.
Cutting edge and from the heart!!!

freedom
10-17-2007, 10:30 PM
Great poem...thanks for sharing it with us

cum4me
10-18-2007, 01:19 AM
thank you for reading it I was beging to think noone liked em

niteowluk2003
10-18-2007, 08:02 AM
You could have me re thinking my reading materials at this rate...thanks for sharing

cum4me
10-22-2007, 07:48 PM
thank you for reading