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meliketaters
10-03-2007, 07:40 PM
This is Part 2 to My Bachlorette Party:

As the clock hit Midnight, I was busy pulling my shirt off to expose my Bs. I stradled Elizabeth and helped her to take her shirt off as well.

“Mmm, you look tasty,” I told her as I stared down at her DDs.

I bent down and kissed her hard on the lips. Our tongues barely touched when I moved to kiss her cheek. Moving down, my lips brushed against the side of her neck. Slowly, I started sucking on her neck (but carefully so as not to leave a mark) as my right hand slid softly down her side.

"O, Baby, that feels great," she told me.

Being pressed against her, I could feel her breasts rubbing against mine. My hormones started to race again. Her erect nipples felt amazing pressed against my body. I was getting turned on again. I moved my kissing and sucking down her neck further to her chest. Since I’d never done anything like this before with another girl, I decided to repeat part of what Elizabeth had done to me earlier. I cupped her right breast and began licking her nipple. Gently, I blew on her breast causing her to shiver. I moved to her other side and began sucking around her breast. My mouth covered her areola and my tongue flicked over her hard nipple. Suddenly, I sat up. I playfully pinched her left nipple and got off the bed.

“Be right back,” I told her.

I reentered the room with a surprise behind my back.

“What do you have,” she asked me.

“You’ll see,” I told her as I climbed back on top of her.

I pulled my vibrator from behind my back.

“O, Yay,” Elizabeth said, “a toy!’

Smiling, my hand dropped to her red panties. Placing my toy aside, I gently pulled down her underwear. Throwing them to the floor, I bent down and kissed the top of her mound. Using my index and middle finger to spread her damp lips apart, I picked up my vibe and turned it on. I pressed it against her slit and traced it up and down. Slowly, I pressed it into her pussy. She squirmed beneath me as I slid it in as far as I could. My right hand caressed her pussy. I started to pump the vibe into her while my index finger rubbed her clit.

“Mmm, turn around," she told me.

I turned my back to her and she helped guide me backward. Postioning my pussy over top her head, she pulled my thong to the side and started licking my pussy again. I rubbed her clit in little circles and pinched it between my fingers. Continuing to pump my vibe in her, I let my tongue take the place of my fingers. It was hard to concentrate with Elizabeth sucking on my own clit, but I tried to mimic her. I felt her fingers slide into my pussy while she licked more furiously. I pumped the vibe in her as hard as i could. I was going to cum soon, but I was determined to get her to cum first. I sucked hard on her clit and felt her moan into my pussy. She started to shake under me. Her juices flowed down my vibe. Finally able to give in, I started to shake as my own orgasm swept through me. She licked hungrily at me. I pulled the vibe out of her and licked her juices up.

"No fair," I said as I turned around to lay next to her, "you made me cum twice."

"That's ok," she smiled, "you can make it up to me later."

We kissed again and fell asleep in each others arms. Five hours later, my cell phone woke us up.

It was a text from my mom, ‘Where r u? @ the hair salon, ur late.’

“Crap,” I said, “I can’t be late for my own wedding!”

freedom
10-03-2007, 08:04 PM
Thanks for the great new chapter :)

meliketaters
10-03-2007, 08:22 PM
Thanks Freedom! ;)

crazyericalynn
10-03-2007, 08:50 PM
Great second part

davesmistress
10-03-2007, 09:33 PM
Great to see you again Taters....thanks for the next addition

meliketaters
10-03-2007, 10:54 PM
Thanks both of you, hope it was ok...felt a little rushed on it :/
Love you Erica!!

davesmistress
10-03-2007, 10:59 PM
No erica it was fine....thanks for adding it for us.

cum4me
10-04-2007, 01:42 AM
thanks for part 2

niteowluk2003
10-04-2007, 06:34 AM
Great addition... I know the feeling about feeling rushed, what i do know is hang back posting a story until i have written chapter two and then post chapter two after writing chapter three.

crazyericalynn
10-04-2007, 08:16 PM
I did not rush you! I just suggested that you post part 2 sooner then you had. Well ok I rushed you. But it was still good babe!

meliketaters
10-05-2007, 02:15 AM
Thanks Cum4me
and Thanks for the idea NiteOwl...think I might copy ur plan ;)
And Erica is a loser face ;flasher; hehe

crazyericalynn
10-05-2007, 02:18 AM
being a loser face is better then being a butt face! ;bite; You should keep the story going. I like it.

meliketaters
10-05-2007, 03:53 AM
Don't worry, I'm gonna work on My Honeymoon...w/o Elizabeth :p Guess you'll have to track it down in the romance section.

meliketaters
10-05-2007, 03:55 AM
P.S. You're a butt loser face hehe;butt;

crazyericalynn
10-05-2007, 03:13 PM
that's better then what you are... nerd! ;type

crazyericalynn
10-05-2007, 03:56 PM
Some of us like Elizabeth. I know you’re busy but if you get the time it would be nice if you could write more stories about the 2 of you. ;) You should write about the movie you watched and what happened that day. :D

meliketaters
10-07-2007, 02:33 AM
Well maybe the reason why people like Elizabeth is because she reminds them of themself...lol Maybe they stop being friends now tho :p (Jk) We'll see if anything happens between them (but remember...shes bi and needs new hubby time hehe) Love you Erica! (coughlosercough)

crazyericalynn
10-07-2007, 02:40 AM
Umm maybe the reason Elizabeth reminds certain people of themselves is because Elizabeth is modeled after a certain person! And although both members of this story are bi and have to split their time between each other and their husbands, it can be done. And just so you know the loser cough is so outdated! :p Love you 2 taters!

meliketaters
10-07-2007, 10:02 PM
Well I guess the Elizabeth model is just gonna have to be jealous of the Honeymoon Story coughcoughcoughiscoughnotcoughovercoughratedcoughl olcough :D

crazyericalynn
10-07-2007, 10:05 PM
Hon you has issues! And yes I'm sure she will be jealous but she has her own husband she can spend time with.

meliketaters
10-07-2007, 10:16 PM
Sorry, Elizabeth isn't married in this story (and even if she was she'd be married to a Tommy :p) And maybe I like her being jealous and that's the point HAHA

crazyericalynn
10-07-2007, 10:25 PM
Well then you're just twisted! And if you're going to model Elizabeth after someone you should include the fact that she's married to a guy named JAMES (not Tommy!!!). Why would Elizabeth be married to her ex?!?!?!?:confused: The fact that you don't like James does not give you the right to change Elizabeth’s martial status! However it does give you the right to change his character a bit. James is modeled after a real person but he doesn’t have to be exactly like that person. And having Elizabeth married shows the kind stress that your relationship with the person she’s modeled after really endures.

meliketaters
10-07-2007, 10:29 PM
LMAO, I lost you at the last sentence...it was just one big rant though LOL I like my version of the story Mrs. Tommy hehe

crazyericalynn
10-07-2007, 10:37 PM
ELIZABETH IS NOT AND WILL NEVER BE MRS. TOMMY!!!!!! Elizabeth is married to James!

darcylynn
10-07-2007, 11:04 PM
Well, reading about those two girls cumming caused me to do the same. Of course my vibrator helped a little too :-)
I loved the story...It was so sexy.

meliketaters
10-08-2007, 03:28 PM
Keep dreaming Erica and thanks for the comment Darcy ;) Me and my inspiration (Mrs. Tommy hehe) here are having a lil discussion over how MY characters are and will be. Either way, my two ladies are cumming back (but the hubby can't be left out in the mean time).

crazyericalynn
10-08-2007, 03:54 PM
That's Mrs James! Just because shes your character doesn't mean you can change Elizabeth's whole life!

meliketaters
10-09-2007, 03:55 AM
O but I can...MUHAHAHA! ::kisses though::

crazyericalynn
10-09-2007, 04:51 PM
FINE!!! You win She'll marry Tommy....if she decides to marry. But for now she can just have some fun with you. :(

meliketaters
10-09-2007, 11:04 PM
Lol (and his name would be Jacob not James [i wouldn't disgrace my other best friend's name by givin it to your...thing :p]) Elizabeth's future is uncertain at this point...so no worries Ms. Erica! ::hearts to my Erica (and a butt pinch)::

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 12:08 AM
My THING has a name and it's not Jacob! And the only reason you hate him so much is becasue you're jealous!

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 12:27 AM
More disappointed than jealous...he doesn't have anything for me to be jealous of...LOL

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 12:41 AM
No? YThe last time I checked he had me? And why be disappointed?

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 12:57 AM
But i could and have had u lol

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 01:00 AM
LOL. Not lately :(

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 01:38 PM
Well if youd come and visit me instead of someone else...:p

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 03:07 PM
hmm let me think about that for a min.... Drive 5 hours to come see you or let my man come pick me up and do no driving at all.... tough choice.… Nope sorry going to see him! And besides every time I see you all you’re concerned about is that butt head you’re with! ;bite;

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 03:10 PM
Well of course I love my butt head! And you drove to see him that first time you cracker!

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 03:15 PM
I DID NOT!!!!!!!!!! He came and got me or I would not have gone! I hate driving!

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 03:23 PM
Well I do to goofy! AND I don't have a car currently...sounds like soemone doesn't love me as much as she says...:(

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 03:34 PM
That's not true and you know it. I wouldn't drive to go see him either

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 03:38 PM
But I can't drive to see you...so that's all the more reason to want to drive to come see me...you know I'd make it worth your while ;)

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 03:43 PM
Yeah until he gets home then it's like I don't exist any more :( And we both know he doesn't trust us alone together (for good reasons ;))

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 03:49 PM
Aww lol, that's why you should come to my dorm...no bf

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 03:50 PM
no but then you have a roommate to worry about!

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 04:13 PM
I'll tell her we need alone time...she knows about you lol

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 04:30 PM
LOL OH. You told her about us?

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 04:53 PM
Of course lol I said thats my sexy lesbian lover!

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 06:43 PM
LOL I don't know about the sexy part but I am defantaly your lesbian lover ;)

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 06:48 PM
Of course you're sexy ;drool turn me on atleast!

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 06:50 PM
LOL you only like me for my boobs.

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 07:16 PM
Well...those are nice too LOL I love you cause you're just about as fucked up as I am lol

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 07:18 PM
LOL and it's your fult that I'm that messed up! I believe all the weird stuff we did together when we were little was your idea!

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 07:27 PM
LOL Maybe...you're welcome...

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 07:30 PM
I don't remember thanking you

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 07:36 PM
:d

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 07:36 PM
** :d

meliketaters
10-10-2007, 07:37 PM
**what the hay...my big toothy smily isnt showing up :(

crazyericalynn
10-10-2007, 11:22 PM
:D LOL it's ok hon we know you're special :D

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 02:42 AM
Atleast I can spell...for the most part!

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 02:48 AM
What did I spell wrong???

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 10:26 AM
Nothing...yet...but we know it's just a matter of time...::pinch the butt::

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 07:46 PM
;bite;

darcylynn
10-11-2007, 10:05 PM
Hmmmm...Am I going to have to get between you girls?........Oh.. the thought of that.....

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 10:31 PM
You can get between us...won't stop me from harrassing Erica still (she's a slut muffin )! Although, you might be a bit of a distraction...

g00ber
10-11-2007, 10:42 PM
hell its hot in here

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 10:54 PM
Slut muffin?? You're gonna pay for that one babe!

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 10:55 PM
Darcy, Like taters said, you can get between us anytime! ;)

g00ber
10-11-2007, 10:55 PM
is that the female version of the male stud muffin?

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 11:23 PM
Lol you betcha Goober! And how are you gonna make me pay Erica?! :: wiggles butt in Ericas face ::

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 11:25 PM
*slaps Taters ass* I have a pair of hands cuffs with your name on them love. You've been a naughty little girl!

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 11:32 PM
Oo baby! I mean, o no! hehe

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 11:33 PM
Oh don't worry you won't enjoy it all....

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 11:34 PM
Me thinks differently love!

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 11:38 PM
Well we'll just have to see about that now won't we

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 11:42 PM
Can we see now?!

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 11:43 PM
Get that perfect ass of yours over here!

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 11:45 PM
No problem! :: walks over to the Erica and plants a kiss on her cheek ::

crazyericalynn
10-11-2007, 11:46 PM
You're getting tied up now!

meliketaters
10-11-2007, 11:57 PM
I'm all yours!

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 01:04 AM
Damn right!

meliketaters
10-12-2007, 03:07 AM
So what's next after getting tied up?!

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 03:09 AM
Wouldn't you like to know!!! You'll just have to wait!

meliketaters
10-12-2007, 03:20 AM
But I don't want to wait!

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 03:21 AM
too bad

meliketaters
10-12-2007, 03:25 AM
You're meanie face!

wizardwriter
10-12-2007, 10:22 AM
Nice story meliketaters, and comments aren't a half bad read either you two naughty little sex kittens- think both of you need spanked

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 03:04 PM
I know I could use a good spanking!

meliketaters
10-12-2007, 05:09 PM
:: blush :: Thanks Wizard! Erica makes me naughty...it's her fault :p

wizardwriter
10-12-2007, 06:28 PM
"maybe, but it's not fair to spank just one, so you got to get a spanking too. Come on, you naughty girls in my office, which by the way," I smile, "I call the dungeon."

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 06:41 PM
OOO I like dungeons. And don't listen to a word Taters says Wizard. She would be naughty even without my help.

wizardwriter
10-12-2007, 06:52 PM
oh, I already know how naughty taters is and how sweet her butt is to spank

meliketaters
10-12-2007, 08:14 PM
I'm a good girl ( most of the time :) ) But, I'd be glad to step into your office Wizard. Mind if I sit on the desk?
Erica- You know you like to tease me and MAKE me bad...I still blame you ;)

wizardwriter
10-12-2007, 08:57 PM
built my desk into the wall, so I don't have enough room for the both of you, but I can bend each of you over the arm of my easy chair, that way you have something to do while you're both getting spanked

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 10:12 PM
Which way to your office Wizard?
Taters- Teasing you is so much fun! Of course I'm gonna make you bad! Your sexy as hell when you have that devilish grin on your face!

darcylynn
10-12-2007, 10:18 PM
Wizard, can I lick 'em while you spank 'em?

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 10:21 PM
Please do!

wizardwriter
10-12-2007, 10:55 PM
yep, lick away darcy, but they don't get any orgasm, yet. my office is due west, hit the ocean you gone to far

crazyericalynn
10-12-2007, 10:58 PM
Ah ok Taters and I will be right over!

darcylynn
10-13-2007, 01:30 AM
Ok Wizard. I will drive them crazy with lust. I will bring them to the edge of orgasm but I won't let them cum unless you tell me to.

crazyericalynn
10-13-2007, 02:15 AM
That's just mean!

meliketaters
10-13-2007, 02:32 AM
Damn, a FOURSOME! lol That is sooo hot! I'm there!

crazyericalynn
10-13-2007, 02:34 AM
Well Duh! but not letting us cum is just mean!

meliketaters
10-13-2007, 02:43 AM
Hell I don't care, it'd be the best orgasm of my life when I did finally cum lol

crazyericalynn
10-13-2007, 02:44 AM
LOL true

meliketaters
10-13-2007, 02:46 AM
Uh huh!

crazyericalynn
10-13-2007, 02:56 AM
I can give you a real good one babe ;)

meliketaters
10-13-2007, 03:25 AM
I know you can ;)

crazyericalynn
10-13-2007, 03:37 AM
hehe ;bf;