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freedom
10-03-2007, 08:23 PM
I see the clouds gathering,
Looks like rain,
I remember the saying,
Into each life a little must fall.

But as the darkness gathers,
There in the distance,
I can see a star shining down at me.
And I smile.

I know through all my rain,
There you'll stay,
So many miles away,
But still so close.

Guiding me and keeping me,
From losing hope,
That life will fail me,
Leave me all alone.

But now I know that through it all,
There is one,
That no matter what,
Will be there for me.

Though destiny has dealt,
A cruel hand,
I still believe,
I still have faith.

Something so true,
Is something worth waiting for.
Miles and space can't stop,
What is meant to be.

In our love I'll never lose faith,
Your love a shining star,
Guiding me on,
Even though it looks like rain.

Kristin
10-03-2007, 08:26 PM
ooohhh... so beautiful!
Thank you, thank you, Freedom!
Just love your poems, girl *hugs*

cum4me
10-03-2007, 08:32 PM
good poem

freedom
10-03-2007, 08:35 PM
Thanks guys....glad you like it

Badlybent
10-04-2007, 02:39 AM
Very Nice Freedom. Thanks a lot.

freedom
10-04-2007, 02:42 AM
thanks bent

davesmistress
10-04-2007, 02:46 AM
Yes very nice...thanks

g00ber
10-04-2007, 02:56 PM
as always freedom, , beautiful, simply beautiful.

wizardwriter
10-04-2007, 10:41 PM
thought I replied earlier, but I did not, bad wizard
lovely poem, Freedom
keep up the fine work

freedom
10-05-2007, 05:50 AM
Thanks guys