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cum4me
10-25-2007, 09:18 PM
This is a poem I wrote while I was in the Army. Hope you enjoy

The wind crys over a field and whispers along the hills
growing slower, lose of moral, as it reaches the woodline loses its will
no one can see the stream that beats like the heart of a man
quenching the thirst of something no one can understand
on dark and stormy days rain falls upon a field and moistins the ground
on a field to far away for anyone to hear the sound
Thou no one is there to care nor help, still the floweres countiue to grow
lost and forgoton but never hit botom in a field of lost souls.

davesmistress
10-25-2007, 09:20 PM
Thats very nice....thank you

freedom
10-26-2007, 04:45 AM
Very nice thanks for sharing it

cum4me
11-08-2007, 01:07 AM
thank you for reading it everyone