View Full Version : Rivers Of Time

12-09-2007, 04:43 PM
These ancient paths that cross are we.
Spirals within time that ever loop upon their course
overlapping, never hindering, unstoppable.

Carried upon these very waves of time all that
we once were in past, all that we have come to be
in present, all we aspire to be within future.
This simple synchronicity that pledged surrender,
heart to heart.

Rushing head long into this soul stream of one
anothers very blood.
Coursing through the other we take that self same
sojourn and share life's kiss.
Do you sense me there as I do you?

As you stand before this mirror that is our lives,
that image in time frozen, captured in the now.
What do you see reflecting back in eyes finally
held wide open?
You see us bound unto the other, souls entwined like
lock mates key.

12-09-2007, 05:10 PM
Very beautiful Jeff...thanks

12-09-2007, 05:25 PM
Beautiful words, Jeff... and a lovely picture as well.
Those words stirred something inside me....

12-09-2007, 09:52 PM
Very nice Jeff. Well written and beautifully done...thanks

12-11-2007, 02:27 AM
very good Great job jeff keep up the good work

12-17-2007, 05:44 PM
wonderful words and the pic looks great too

12-17-2007, 09:10 PM
Wow, that was just wonderful to read

02-26-2008, 06:02 AM
beutiful poem I like it

08-13-2008, 12:11 AM
that was really a beautiful poem

Brigit Astar
08-13-2008, 12:56 PM

11-05-2008, 04:27 AM
beautiful piece! thank you!