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LadyRaven
01-20-2008, 12:59 AM
Melting, scattering sensation, sharing your essence
Tasting the gift you give, the blessing
Tear drops, salty and satin
Roll down like rain in autumn
Your wicked scent, teasing the air
Your soft sounds echoing through my mind
Time lost, time never forgotten
As that first moment, first time we joined
Our flesh as one, your fingers delving deep
Our breasts, so swollen and full
Brushing to and fro, like children at play
Our moans, twining in the mist
Brush my mind now, like ghostly fingertips
Our love once found, could never be lost
Yet I am here, and you are gone.

davesmistress
01-20-2008, 02:58 AM
Very Nice....thanks

blueshark
01-20-2008, 03:01 AM
WoW!
Thanks for sharing so much. I loved the pace of that poem and
understand loss. I very much related to your words.
I bet you are a fantastic chick.

cum4me
01-20-2008, 03:13 AM
great poem very well written

LadyRaven
01-20-2008, 05:33 AM
Thank you, blueshark, cum4me, and davesmistress for your kind responses. I like poetry and have too long been away from it. I used to write all of the time, nothing spectacular, just my thoughts and feelings but I feel like I've wandered away from that.

I really appreciate the positive feedback! :)

Scorpio'sWill2Power
01-20-2008, 04:36 PM
A real nice erotic touch on that one LadyRaven.

I know where you're coming from with this one
and wanting to feel that woman's touch once again.

At times it's something that only two women can
share that makes it all the better.

Wonderful poetry and proff that art does often
imitate life!!!