View Full Version : First attempt at erotic poetry...

06-14-2008, 04:52 AM
Hi. Haven't written this way before but wanted to give a try. Please tell me what you think! There are two poems here.


Dreaming of the ecstasy of your lips on my breasts
The fire of your touch wends down my back
And back up again
Your sweet mouth sucks gently, insistently
Driving my fever to new heights
The burning within intensifies
Branching out and building in strength
My hands grasp your hair
I moan as the exquisite sucking deepens
Your fingers trail down, down, down
Sparks ignite with every touch
My eyes open in surprise…
At the pillow I am holding to my breasts
At the ecstasy that was merely a dream.


Thread your fingers through my hair
Tell me your plans…
Will you touch me?
Will you kiss me?
Will you suckle?
Will you stroke?
My body is your playground
I tilt my neck to your roaming lips
I thrust my breasts at your open mouth
I wind a leg around yours
Drawing you closer…
The feel of your hardness against me
The gentle insistent sucking of your lips
I wind my fingers through your hair
My plans for you…
I will touch you
I will kiss you
I will suck
I will stoke
Your body is my playground.

Brigit Astar
08-13-2008, 01:03 PM
I like...very nice

08-13-2008, 01:11 PM
Very good. Keep up the good work. And if I have not said so, welcome to the group.

09-10-2008, 04:18 AM
Lovely, I liked them.

09-10-2008, 04:20 AM
dayummm very very nice