View Full Version : My first try at this...Wasn't really sure where to post

10-20-2008, 12:51 AM
I first wrote this many years ago and I preset it in it's rawest form. I, by no means, consider myself a writer. I was just putting some thought down with my keyboard, mostly to read over again later. I have a few others like this, so if you do enjoy it, please let me know and I can post some of the others!
So without further ado.....enjoy

" I’ve had many thoughts of my wife screwing
someone else. These are the many fantasies I’ve had.
My wife has nice big tits with huge suckable nipples,
a nice ass and a pussy that taste great. There will be
many variations to this as I brainstorm.
Most of this started before we even got married.
We got in an argument one night. I don’t remember what
it was for but she had said that she could go get
fucked by the guard at the gate. He had been hitting
on her when she came in. Then she left. A million
things went through my mind while she was gone. I
could imagine her with him. At first I was mad as
hell… but then it was kind of arousing. I thought of
her going down on him in her car, him fondling her big
tits, then eventually, her getting on top of him and
riding him in the back seat until he filled her with
is cum. I could imagine his spunk running down his
shaft as it went in and out of her soaking wet pussy,
mixing into her dark pubic hair. I was hot as hell!!
Then she came back and we made up and had sex. As I
was fucking her I thought of her pussy lubricated with
his cum. I fucked her very hard that night and was
almost the best sex we had up until that point. Little
did I know that this would lead to years of
fantasizing about my wife having sex with other
Let me explain a few things about me before I get
to far ahead of myself. I have been bisexual most of
my life. I’ve only been with one person. It started
when I was a kid with my neighbor. I think it was just
innocent exploration at first, but then got much
deeper. He started bribing me for sex with cigarettes
and then later, joints. We did it a lot of places in
many different ways. We did it in his bed, in the
shower, at his cabin, in a sauna, in a hot tub, and
even in the back of his car. He’d take me from behind,
from the front like a girl, from the side, and I’d
ride him. We did it any time we could. I even used to
blow him and drink his seed in the front seat of his
car on the way to school. But I was always the “girl”
of the relationship. Maybe that’s why I would love to
submit to my wife and a lover?? Who knows?
Anyway, The last time we were together was the
year just after I got married. We were out at his
cabin cutting the grass. After we were done we decided
to have a few beers and go for a swim. We swam around
for a while then rested. He was sitting on the end of
the dock when I swam up. He pulled his cock out
jokingly, shook it at me and said, “ Suck me!”. So I
did. I took him in my mouth and began to bob up and
down on his cock. I swirled my tongue around the head
and took him all the way into my mouth. After awhile,
he was coming close and asked if I wanted to take a
shower. I said, “ Sure”. So up we go to the cabin and
started to shower. By this time, there was a system to
this dance. I’d wash him, he’d wash me, then he’d get
his hands really soapy and start to finger my ass to
loosen it. You have to understand, he was pretty hung
even back then. He had a very large head that would
get purple the longer we went on and it was nice and
thick too. He would soap me up and then turn we around
and we would do it standing up with him behind me. He
fucked me for about 5 minutes and I could tell he was
about to cum when I said,” Let’s go inside where we
can be more comfortable.” He said ok and we got out of
the shower and dried off. We went into the cabin and
went to the back room. I had him lay on the edge of
the bed and I started to suck him again. I sucked his
balls and gently ran my finger over his asshole. After
a bit, he suggested that we 69 for a while. I was on
top of him and we were going at it. After about 5
minutes, I couldn’t take it anymore; I had to have him
in me. Without saying anything, I got up and scooted
down so I was over his cock. I grabbed it , positioned
it, then quickly sank onto it. It was slightly
difficult to do semi dry but I managed to sink it all
the way to the hilt in one smooth motion. I started to
ride up and down his cock slowly as I felt him
stretching me out. As I loosened up, it was easier and
easier. I was soon smashing my ass down as hard as I
could on him. Before I could make him cum he stopped
me. He had me lay on my back with my feet in the air.
He grabbed his cock and rammed into me, then grabbed
my ankles and pushed them as far back as they would
go. He was fucking my ass mercilessly when a thought
went through my head. I suddenly blurted that I wanted
to eat his cum form my wife’s black pussy…. I could
believe I said it! I guess this id the trick because
he only grunted and pulled out of my ass. I quickly
sat up and took him in my mouth just as he was about
to shoot. I buried my nose in his pubic hair and felt
the first burst hit the back of my throat. He grabbed
the back of my head and pumped his cock in and out of
my mouth. By the time he was through, which was about
30 seconds, I had cum running down my chin and
dripping onto my chest. I scooped it up with my hand
and licked it off my hand.
The reason I wanted to tell my background is so
you know where I get my perversions from. With my
experiences, I like the taste of cum. When I would
masturbate, I would cum in my hand and lick it off. A
lot of things changed in my life shortly after this
happened. I felt kind of bad that I hand done this to
my wife so one night I confessed. I told her
everything, even that the dildo I had bought had
really been meant for me, and that I had used it on
myself several times. We got into a very large
argument over it. I guess I could blame her for being
upset. That was an awful lot to digest!! I left the
house for awhile to cool down. When I came back, she
was sitting on the couch with the dildo in hand. She
said,” Your going to prove what you say is true, now
get over here.” She stared to take off her clothes and
laid on the couch.” Get over here and suck my pussy
while I put this in your ass.” So, being the
submissive one I am, I did as I was told. I got on top
of her and buried my face in her pussy and began
lapping at her clit. I was positioned so my legs were
under her arms and she spread my ass. I felt the dildo
at the entrance to my ass and protested, “ You need to
lube that up!” She said, “ Shut up and take it!!” and
then smacked me on my ass. She forced the rubber head
into me. I licked at her clit even harder. She farced
it all the way in and then pulled it out, then slammed
it back in. She then took my cock into her mouth and
sucked me while she fucked my ass with the dildo. I
could take too much more and when I felt her begin to
breathe hard like she was getting turned on, I started
to cum. She has never let me cum in her mouth so she
just let my cock fall out of her mouth but continued
to punish my asshole. I continued to suck and lick her
clit until she had cum. She told me to get off her so
I did. She grabbed her clothes, threw the dildo on the
couch and went into our bedroom and left me to sleep
on the couch.
This evening was never discussed again. But the
fact that I “cheated” does. Every time we fight.
Here’s some of what I’ve thought about:
We have my friend over for dinner. We sit and talk
and drink. We sit on the couch with him in the middle
and start watching TV. After the kids are put in bed
and are fast asleep, she says,” Why don’t you two show
me what you used to do?” I look at her as if I’m
confused, even though I know exactly what she means.
She looks back and gets impatient. She reaches over
and grabs his crotch. She squeezes his package and ten
says,” Ohhh, He was right about you!” She unzips his
pants, reaches in, and pulls his semi hard cock out.
She looks at me and shakes his cock at me. “ Well,
Come on…” she says and looks back down at his dick. I
couldn’t help it. I lean over and take him in my
mouth. She sits and watches as I give him a blowjob. I
feel the weight shift on the couch and glance up and
see that he has got his arm around her and is giving
her a deep tongue kiss. I keep sucking, one hand on
his balls. I look over to see him reaching up under
her shirt and begin to fondle her big black tits. I
can hear her breathe already beginning to quicken.
Again the weight shifts and I see her getting up off
the couch and taking off her clothes. Her nipples are
rock hard and poking out as she pulls hr shirt over
her head. She bends over to pull her pants down and I
watch her heavy tits hang in the air. Then after she
is naked, she sits back on the couch with her legs
spread wide. I watch as he reaches between her legs
and begins to finger her pussy as he kisses her neck.
She slowly pushes him down so he is kissing and then
eventually sucking her tit. “ She looks over at me and
says,” Suck that good. Get it real wet cause I’m going
to fuck that big thing!!” I double my efforts. I can
hear his fingers going in and out of her now because
she is so wet. Her hips start to meet his hand and she
is breathing really hard.
Suddenly I feel a hand on my head and it pushes me
away. She tells me to move the coffee table, take my
clothes off and go sit in the chair. I do as I’m told.
She leans over and takes his dick down her throat and
cups his balls. I begin to jack off as I watch her
work. She gets up on her hand sand knees while she
sucks him and he is able to reach under her and play
with her big clit. She has her hands wrapped tightly
around him cock, milking him, as her head bobs up and
She finally stops and stands up. She looks over at
me and says,” This is what you have been waiting to
see.” She centers herself on him with her back to him.
Reaching down, she grabs his cock and points in up
towards her pussy and slowly squats down. She stops
just before his cock enters her and rubs the fat head
up ad down her wet slit. Getting it all wet, she is
ready for him. She has her legs spread wide so I have
a good view. I watch as she slowly lowers herself onto
his tool. I see it sink deeper and deeper into her wet
black pussy. I look and her eyes are closed as she
takes his fat cock into her box. She finally stops
when he is all the way in her. She opens her eyes and
looks at me and says,” Do you like what you see?” All
I can do is nod my head. She begins to stand and pull
his cock out. She gets right to where the head is all
that is left and starts back down. He reaches around
and squeezes her tits as she starts to get into a
rhythm. The speed picks up and I can hear the sloshing
noise as her wet cunt engulfs his big cock.. She says
to me,” Get over here on your hands and knees and lick
my clit.” I jump from the chair and do as I ‘m told. I
spread her lips and start lapping at her clit as she
rises up and comes back down. I can see up closes that
her pussy is stretched tightly on his dick. I see her
juices running down his cock and balls and I can’t
help licking it up. I hear her breath becoming
quicker and quicker. Suddenly I feel her hand on the
back of my head and she is pushing m hard against her
sopping wet cunt. She starts to moan and quicken her
pace. She moan’s, “ I’m going to cuuuuuuuummmmmmm” and
reaches down and rubs on her clit. She keeps riding
him as she begins to shake with orgasm. He is all
sweaty and his cock is big and purple from the strain
of not cumming. I lean down further and suck his heavy
She stands up and tells me to lay in the middle of
the couch. I lay down and she straddles my face so her
ass is pointing towards my feet and she leans over the
arm of the couch I start to lick her pussy again and I
feel him kneel on the couch over me.. I watch as he
positions his cock at the entrance to her pussy. His
hips come forward as he sinks himself into her. I feel
his balls hit my chin when he is all the way in. He
then starts to fuck her mercilessly, holding her hips
so she can’t go anywhere. His balls continue to bounce
off my chin. I reach up and grab her tits and pinch
her nipples. Her hips involuntarily start to thrust
back to meet his strokes. They both get quicker and
quicker. I hear him groan the he is ready to burst so
I fondle his balls. This pushes him over the edge!! He
starts to shake and groan as he shots his load into
her pussy. He keeps stroking deep inside her as I feel
her begin to shake also. His load has now set her over
the edge also. With his stroking and her spasms, his
seed starts to run form her pussy along with her cum.
I open my mouth wide to catch it all. I have to
swallow twice before the wave subsides. They slow down
and she pushes him away. She instructs me to get up. I
do. She lays so her ass is hanging over the edge of
the couch and she orders me to fuck her. She tells him
to come here and begins to stroke his cock as I get
between her legs and place my cock in her cum filled
hole. I begin to stroke but I don’t last long knowing
that part of the warmth I feel in her is his cum. I
dump my load into her wet cunt. She tells me to lick
it out so I lean do and do as I’m told. She says ,”
Now it’s your turn!” She tells him to stick it in her
some more to get in it all wet then tells me to keep
eating. She directs him to go behind me and he knows
what to do. I feel him grab my ass and spread my
cheeks. I feel his slimy cock at the entrance to my
asshole. I then feel a splitting pain as he jams his
cock deep into my bowls. I give a small squeal but she
just grabs my head, holds it hard against her pussy
and says shut up. He grabs my hips hard and begins to
harshly fuck my hole. His balls bounce against mine as
he takes me. She sits and watches as he does this;
just relaxing and getting her pussy ate. This goes on
for about 15 minutes until he starts to tire. She
tells him not to cum in me and that she wants one more
load. He pulls out of me and I move out of the way as
he move up between her legs. He pushes her ankles back
and sinks his engorged tool deep into her again. She
reaches down and plays with her own clit as he fucks
her well used pussy. She closes her eyes and begins to
shake. Another orgasm has arrived. He groans as her
pussy clasps to his cock and causes him to cum also.
He dumps his seed deep in her canal. I lie beneath
them and catch the droppings as they run down her ass
cheeks. When they finally slow down, her pubic hair
and dark skin is covered with a white froth. She tells
him to sit next to her on the couch. I am instructed
to clean them up. I first lick all the cum from her
ass cheeks and work my way up. I suck the spunk fro
her pubic hair and spread her pussy lips and lick them
thoroughly clean. I then turn my attention to him. I
suck his the slimy head of his cock into my mouth. I
swirl my tongue around the head. I take his full
length in next. I can taste her pussy on it. I milk
his shaft to get every drop of his cum.
After I am done, we get up, get something to drink
and the night has turned to morning. It is time for
him to go.

comments are always welcome, Thanks!

10-20-2008, 01:04 AM
Thanks for the addition

Only suggestion is to break up the paragraphs a bit more, and try to double space then when you submit it, it will look single spaced.

10-20-2008, 01:12 AM
Thanks for the constructive criticism...I'll keep that in mind for the future. We must crawl before we stagger....

10-21-2008, 10:25 AM
nice one

10-21-2008, 01:43 PM
Good story that following Dm's advice will appeal and does show some good creative talent.

Brigit Astar
10-21-2008, 06:49 PM
not bad at all for a first try

10-22-2008, 03:16 AM
Thanks to everyone for the kind words...I'll try to find my other writings...;shake