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freedom
09-15-2006, 12:49 PM
No matter my mood,
Your face makes me smile,
Your scent makes my heart race.
The laughter I hear from you,
Brightens my life,
No matter how gray.
Whatever my problem,
Whatever my care,
When you're around -
They all go away.
You make me happy,
Make me smile,
You are my happiness.

davesmistress
09-15-2006, 12:56 PM
Thanks Freedom...that is very cool.....always enjoy your poetry.

Dark_Star
09-16-2006, 05:38 PM
Yes, that was very special! Thanks, you do have a way with words!

MYDaddysBox
09-22-2006, 02:50 AM
from the heart.. i like that...

davesmistress
09-22-2006, 03:11 AM
Please feel free mydaddysbox to post some of yours here also...I know you write it....it is always welcome

ADavid
09-22-2006, 02:11 PM
awww gee thanx for talking about me like that freedom lol hahahahahhahah roflmao
No matter my mood,
Your face makes me smile,
Your scent makes my heart race.
The laughter I hear from you,
Brightens my life,
No matter how gray.
Whatever my problem,
Whatever my care,
When you're around -
They all go away.
You make me happy,
Make me smile,
You are my happiness.

davesmistress
09-22-2006, 02:28 PM
Hahahahahahahaha Andrew....you are crazy

freedom
09-23-2006, 06:55 PM
awww gee thanx for talking about me like that freedom lol hahahahahhahah roflmao

Well...ummmm...LOL...ok...I was going to try and be serious but oh well...lol!

You're a nut Adavid!!!!!!

ADavid
09-23-2006, 10:20 PM
sorry i really did like it. it was awesome.. please write more

freedom
09-23-2006, 10:33 PM
Like my photo's...I've got tons...just need the time to post them

davesmistress
09-23-2006, 10:51 PM
I agree...sometimes there is just not enough time in the day to do all that you want to....I enjoy it also and will welcome all you have freedom when you have time to submit it.

ADavid
09-24-2006, 05:02 AM
Yea I know what you mean. it is hard to find the time to devote to everything running my own business, so i just do what i can when I can.
I agree...sometimes there is just not enough time in the day to do all that you want to....I enjoy it also and will welcome all you have freedom when you have time to submit it.

freedom
09-24-2006, 06:12 AM
That's all any of us can do...the best we can.

madhan
09-24-2006, 06:44 AM
Its nice poem Freedom. Why do you say, its non-erotic?... Its very sensual. I like it verymuch.

freedom
09-24-2006, 06:55 PM
I just put it in non erotic cause it wasn't a heavily sexual poem. Glad yo liked it though!

madhan
09-24-2006, 11:27 PM
When my lover reads this poem, it will turn her on, for sure!... Actually, often times, suggestions are more sexier. This is a great poem.

freedom
09-25-2006, 12:16 PM
You've got a point. Thanks again...if she reads it I hope she likes it as well.