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Kai Kenobi
10-02-2005, 04:26 PM
Note: this poem is not mine it was written by the very talented poet
Amanda Sutfin


I close my eyes,
Thoughts of you fill my mind.
My daydreams innocent enough.
Images of us walking hand in hand,
Soft kisses on a wooded path.
The innocence begins to fade,
I see your hands begin to drift,
They softly touch my body.
My heartbeat quickens,
Kisses no longer soft,
Demanding a response.
My tongue finds yours,
Smoothing in your embrace,
I moan as our passions build.
Our bodies entwined,
Leaves the bed of our love.
Our heat filling the cool night.
Starlight glistens on our sweat covered bodies.
Our moans chorused by nature.
Sensations filling us with pleasure.
Shuddering we sink into each others arms,
And I open my eyes.

freedom
10-02-2005, 05:05 PM
Thank you Kai. I'm glad you like my poetry! :) ;)

MYDaddysBox
10-01-2006, 06:09 PM
I LOVE THIS ONE got to find some more from this auther...

Hotwriterx
10-03-2006, 04:22 AM
heheh very good

freedom
10-03-2006, 12:09 PM
I LOVE THIS ONE got to find some more from this auther...

Well you don't have to look far Mydaddysbox...that would be me :)...I've got several on here...if you want more...let me know...I'll hook you up!

Glad you all like it...this one meant a lot to me.

cactuscock
10-03-2006, 01:10 PM
Well you don't have to look far Mydaddysbox...that would be me :)...I've got several on here...if you want more...let me know...I'll hook you up!

Glad you all like it...this one meant a lot to me.

heheheheh, she looked at me from outter space when i told her who it was and then she says 'WELL DONT I FEEL LIKE A DOPE..'LOL


very nice freedom..

davesmistress
10-03-2006, 03:09 PM
Hahahah oh my goodness...I didnt put the 2 together at first...hahahha Beautiful Freedom...

Would be nice to also see if we could get Kai to come back around these parts.

freedom
10-03-2006, 08:04 PM
Yeah it would be nice. Glad you all like my poems...all the poems Kai posted here I wrote. I just kinda thought you all knew...lol

MYDaddysBox
10-04-2006, 02:08 AM
i really like this one.

freedom
10-04-2006, 12:37 PM
Well...that means a lot to me...thank you