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davesmistress
09-18-2006, 12:17 AM
I thought this was very deeply felt and reminded me of a special someone....

"Loving You..."
by Ancient117331

How my thoughts
are racing soooo...
I just whispered aloud -
"I love you...",
and have the softest feeling -
for real,
no teasing.

You 'get' to me so damnably easy...
I don't know or understand why
or how -
you just do.
It's because...
somehow... we... belong.
I know...
silly me.

I melt at some awkward times
and just shake my head at others.
But I want to hold you so tight
and make love to you
and hold you close afterward
and make love to you
and just 'be' with you
and love you.

Woman...the thoughts that just race by
physical... mental...
my stomachs a big knot
and I want to sing,
smile... just laugh...
shake it off...
but can't.

I want you curled with me,
around me,
on me.
I want to be in you -
a part of you...
held so very tight and close...
and never let go.
I want to touch you,
taste...
explore...
mentally, physically...
and more -
so much more.
I want to play
and 'be'
as only we can.

How my thoughts
are racing soooo...
such is the beginning
of 'loving' you...
silly me.

Hotwriterx
09-24-2006, 07:10 AM
WOW that is very good!

davesmistress
09-24-2006, 07:29 AM
I just wish I had the talent myself....thanks for enjoyiing it also...

chattel69
09-24-2006, 12:16 PM
nice i may have to send that to a friend of mine who is soon off to war...

davesmistress
09-24-2006, 06:37 PM
Sure...just copy/paste........I thought it was beautiful and needed something for this area...

thanks for reading it also chattel

freedom
09-24-2006, 06:57 PM
Awesome poem...nice find girlie!

Dark_Star
09-24-2006, 08:33 PM
Very good, enjoyed it alot...Thanks!

davesmistress
09-24-2006, 08:35 PM
You are all very welcome.....