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freedom
10-03-2005, 05:14 AM
How do I open the door to my soul?
How do I show you the real me?
I want to be what you want me to be.
How can I tell you what I'm about?
I act hard but underneath I'm soft.
I'm not what I seem to be.
If you'd look at me I think you'd see,
See a different side of me.
The true me that hides inside.
Take tiime and actually get to know me.
Then maybe you'd understand me.
I'm not as callous and cold as I seem to be.
Remember looks can be decieving.
I understand you more then you know.
The soul behind your eyes I've actually seen.
I've stopped, looked and learned.
It's the soul in your eyes that I like.
Not the color of them or your hair or your body,
But the soul of the MAN behind the eyes.

Amanda Sutfin

Kai Kenobi
10-03-2005, 05:25 AM
your poems as i read them, seem to take on a soul of their own.

i'm impressed, Angel

freedom
10-03-2005, 05:32 AM
Thank you Kai. Your kind words are appreciated! ;)

Jolly1
10-03-2005, 08:33 AM
Very good ---Thanks for sharing it with us