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freedom
09-24-2006, 07:53 PM
You touched me,
My heart still pounds,
Every look, every touch,
Makes my soul fly.
I feel new,
Like I've never been touched before.
Dreams fill my mind.
Someday I hope it'll be better,
I wanna scream for joy!
Want to be in your arms,
Feel you caress,
Your lips on my skin,
Makes my blood burn,
My breathing fast,
Someday... I dream.

davesmistress
09-24-2006, 08:02 PM
Wow...awesome Freedom...I just love your stuff....thanks so much for sharing it....

Dark_Star
09-24-2006, 08:04 PM
Very good! Thanks enjoyed it very much.

freedom
09-24-2006, 09:34 PM
Glad you all liked it :)

Hotwriterx
09-25-2006, 11:40 PM
WOW that is a great one!

ADavid
09-26-2006, 12:32 AM
wow freedom that is very well done. thanx a bunch. Im really beginning to enjoy your work please keep sharing them with us.

freedom
09-26-2006, 01:25 AM
I'm glad you are enjoying it everyone...I love to write poetry...I've written since I was a little kid. LOL...just don't expect a rhyming poem anytime soon...lol...never was good at those!

ADavid
09-26-2006, 04:19 AM
hows about one of those silly little poems they tried to teach people to write in highschool i forget what its called I think it had something to do with trees or something like that... only like three lines I dunno
I'm glad you are enjoying it everyone...I love to write poetry...I've written since I was a little kid. LOL...just don't expect a rhyming poem anytime soon...lol...never was good at those!

freedom
09-26-2006, 12:36 PM
Nope...don't do Hiku's either...the only one I know starts out...

I once knew a man from Nantucket...lol...you should know the rest...lol