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jenne69
10-18-2010, 12:37 PM
Life Starts.

Life starts,
when the blood is all dried and your tears are all gone.
When you have no more promises to left break
and your forced to carry on.

Life starts the moment your too numb to fake .
and you’ve broken everything that you might have left behind,
when there’s nothing from you left for anyone to take.

When all the old attachments and loves disappear
Life starts when its almost the end.
Life starts when everything is gone and there’s no where else to turn.

Life starts when your letting go,
but you spirit refuses oblivion.
Life starts the moment its dark than the pits of hell.

Did you think it would be fun?
When everyone is waiting for you to go ahead and slip.
When you trust no one, not even yourself,
Some where in all this is the clarity you crave.
Life starts the moment you see.

niteowluk2003
10-18-2010, 07:09 PM
Thanks for this deep meaningful poetry.

davesmistress
10-19-2010, 03:44 AM
Very nice

thanks