View Full Version : Immortal beloved

10-18-2010, 12:46 PM
My heart, you are near yet the distance is unbearable.
Will I ever feel your warmth again?
Love fades like the colors of a dream, blending with your mind tll it
is no longer there.
But the residue of memory remains.

In the darkness I see no other light but yours and that of our love.
Our love IS the shadow eclpsing the sun
and that is where I long to stay.
For eternity there is only one who claims my heart and soul.
There is only you.

Will our promises be lost and forgetten in the march of time?
Will the harsh light take away the gentle twiight that envelopes us?
Whisper to me again my beloved!
I am lost without you!
I am not myself without you to complete me!

We must leave this place and each other.
My soul wont bear the parting, it will not give you up.
Before our heads are turned and we depart each other,
let me hear you say I was to you what you will always be to me.

So delicate was you hold on my heart, yet the imprint will always remain.
I am yours forever, come what may.
I will stand my ground and weather the time,
for my one , my only, my immortal love.
I will stand waiting for you.

10-18-2010, 07:06 PM
What a wonderful sentimental piece of poetry, thanks for sharing it here.

10-19-2010, 03:47 AM
Very lovely indeed

Thanks again

Brigit Astar
04-11-2011, 07:55 PM
This is just my opinion, but I think it's one stanza too long.