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freedom
10-05-2005, 07:43 AM
Kai I believe you said this was your favorite right? Thought I'd post it for you!



When you smile at me,
My heartbeat quickens.
Butterflies dance in my stomach.
Your blue eyes,
So deep, so beautiful,
Like the ocean before a storm.
The moment your eyes are on me,
I know you can see into my soul.
My mind begins to wonder.
What do you see,
When you look at me?
Every look so intense.
Your soul, your passions,
So wild and strong.
Leaving me breathless,
Wanting more.

Jolly1
10-05-2005, 10:48 AM
Very intense---thanks Freedom

Kai Kenobi
10-05-2005, 03:37 PM
Ah, my Angel all your poems are great, but true this one does hold a special something that draws me in ;)

Kai, thanking freedom for posting such a powerful poem