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freedom
09-26-2006, 12:42 PM
I think of you,
Day and night,
My frist thought when I awake,
My last before I sleep.

You have my heart,
Stolen my soul,
I don't think I can live without you,
But from my life you threaten to go.

Greener grasses you long for,
My heart will wither,
My soul turn to dust,
Not seeing your smile,
Not feeling your hugs.

I remember your kiss on my lips,
I sigh in contentment.
You are a theif,
You picked the lock.

The lock I had placed upon my heart,
You opened the door to love,
Now it won't close,

Emotions once ignored,
Pour out uncontrolled,
The plans I laid in place,
To hide my heart,
To avoid pain...

Shattered with a kiss,
With your leaving,
My exsistance will dwindle,
My heart once more under lock.

And to you alone do I give the key,
Only you can set me free.

davesmistress
09-26-2006, 02:25 PM
Awesome Freedom...thanks for finding the time to share that.....

freedom
09-26-2006, 08:05 PM
You are so welcome...glad you like it

ADavid
09-27-2006, 02:19 AM
way to go Freedom hehe

Hotwriterx
10-07-2006, 02:41 AM
WoW freedom i really liked that !

freedom
10-07-2006, 03:36 AM
I'm glad you liked it :)

Kai Kenobi
10-07-2006, 07:02 PM
another masterpeice from a great poet;good;

freedom
10-08-2006, 12:19 AM
awwww...shucks Kai...thanks...glad you liked it