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writermike
09-27-2006, 07:38 PM
What was

The air is not air
The water is not water
And the funnies are not funny
Any more
What is
Doesn’t look like it was
What was was a dream
The dream is something nice
What is is and not so nice
God Bless my dream

chattel69
09-27-2006, 07:50 PM
Don't we all wish we could live in your dreams.

davesmistress
09-28-2006, 03:21 AM
I really like your stuff writermike....from stories to poetry...

Thanks again

cactuscock
09-30-2006, 03:48 PM
a dream is vessel that takes us were we want to go . thank you..

MYDaddysBox
10-26-2006, 02:00 AM
hey now i'm in my dream all the time... thanks to cactuscock...love it writermike.