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freedom
11-17-2006, 11:09 PM
Your eyes looking into mine,
Our lips touch,
Tongues explore each others mouths,
Hands begin to move,
A moan escapes my lips.
As your fingers intertwine in my hair,
Pulling forcefully yet gently.
Nibbling at my ears and neck,
Shivers filling my body,
I feel my body responding,
To your amazing touch.
You keep playing my body,
Like a well tuned instrument.
I begin to return the favor,
Unbuckling your belt,
My hands caressing,
Stroking, teasing,
Your perfection.
I feel your body quiver in response.
My mouth moves from yours,
My lips wrapping around you,
Tight warm and moist,
You play my body,
As I play yours,
A beautiful duet,
But yet unfinished.
Leaving me waiting,
For the next chorus.

davesmistress
11-17-2006, 11:31 PM
HUmmmm Very hot indeed.....someone in particular in mind?.....

Thanks for sharing that

ADavid
11-18-2006, 04:17 AM
very spicy freedom lol hahah yea i go with robin on this one....anyone in particular you had in mind????? come on now tell, spill it.

Hotwriterx
11-18-2006, 12:02 PM
hehehe love that one!

freedom
11-18-2006, 06:27 PM
All I can say is that sometimes...real life makes the best material. I can't tell all my secrets. :)

ADavid
11-18-2006, 11:40 PM
hahahha your such a teaser lol
All I can say is that sometimes...real life makes the best material. I can't tell all my secrets. :)

davesmistress
11-18-2006, 11:50 PM
All I can say is that sometimes...real life makes the best material. I can't tell all my secrets. :)


So very true.....we cant have men knowing EVERYTHING......:)

freedom
11-19-2006, 12:00 PM
Really...they already think they do anyway...lol

ADavid
11-19-2006, 03:40 PM
HhhAHAHA not all of us.. im as dumb as a box of rocks lol there you happy....I know nothing
Really...they already think they do anyway...lol

freedom
11-19-2006, 05:12 PM
Wow...Robin...write that down...that maybe a first in the history of men...lol

davesmistress
11-20-2006, 12:29 AM
And on this day...it was stated...hahhahahhaa You are silly Andrew....

ADavid
11-20-2006, 02:36 AM
hahahahha I know but gotta love me
And on this day...it was stated...hahhahahhaa You are silly Andrew....

freedom
11-21-2006, 08:34 PM
We'll think about it! LOL

01TACO
05-24-2007, 03:07 AM
hot!

freedom
05-24-2007, 04:01 AM
Thanks

frozen_north
06-09-2007, 12:46 AM
:) Spicy, hot and sweet. God I wish I could write poetry

freedom
06-09-2007, 12:50 AM
give it a try...you never know what you might come up with

Nightwater
07-03-2007, 07:57 AM
While reading your poem, I was thinking of your profile and the spider waiting upon your cheek. I have heard the true story of the male Black Widow that must strum a hypnotic tune upon the web of his desire. If he gets it wrong, she will kill him straight out. If he is lucky, she will fall under his spell and he will have her. Female Black Widows are not easily sated. They usually awake and devourer their suitors. Your lover must have stroked the right cord. Thanks.

freedom
07-03-2007, 08:09 AM
i wish...my love is unreturned in this case. It's a lesson learned.

I'm glad you like the poem thought and thank you for the feed back.

g00ber
07-03-2007, 09:46 AM
Great poem freedom. For the record Men don't know everything and women are always right(even when they are wrong they are right) but at least only men can read maps, and the reason for that is only a man can understand that an inch equals a mile rofl

Kiljoy_Dreizehn
08-29-2007, 02:10 AM
very nice. beautiful and hot, just like the author

freedom
08-29-2007, 07:28 AM
Thanks KJ