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    LadyRaven
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    When I lay here with my head beside yours on the pillow, I can smell your skin.
    Your heart beats so hard, so strong I can hear it echo in mine.
    I dream of you, even when you're right beside me.
    My heart swells until my chest hurts, just touching, kissing, tasting you.
    For you, always. In my heart, in my mind, in my body. Yours.

    I know I'm not the best that I can be
    I know I leave a lot to be desired but
    for you I can give anything and everything.


    Hush, touch me
    The crisp hair, the cool air
    Smooth skin, silky but so firm
    Sliding, slowly, sensuously together
    You are so hard, I am so soft
    Yielding, sheathing that hardest of parts
    Gripping, sighing, straining upward
    Onward of the light, glowing, exploding
    Tearing apart on the rocks of our lust
    Breaking like waves through our flesh
    Gasping as the tide pulls away
    Leaving me seared and open
    Spread before you like so many
    sacrifices
    Only to be lifted, and drifting, gently down.
    In your arms, we begin again.
    The silence weighing down, filled with only our sighs
    Hush, touch me. Touch me again.

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    This was excellant Raven. You really have a talent

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    Very lovely indeed

    thanks
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    I was never much of a poetry fan to be honest, but this was in my new posts list so I thought I'd have a look.
    WOW !! Am I glad I did. This poem made the little hairs on the back of my neck stand up and gave me goose bumps. I really like this poem and it touched me.

    Thank you so much for opening my eyes to something I was blind to
    Beware! I like to kiss other girls

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    Oh Lady Raven - this is sooo beautiful! Thanks for sharing, sweetie! *kisses softly*
    Nothing given freely
    is ever given up
    It will be given back to you
    Through others' love and trust

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    that is a great poem, gave me the chills.
    Veronica :)

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    Thank you everyone. The beauty of poetry is that it can mean so many different things to different people. It is all about who reads it, not who wrote it. The eye of the beholder and whatnot. :) Thanks again!

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    Lovely!

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    thats a beutiful poem

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    wow thats a beutiful poem well done xx

 

 

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