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    Whirlpool of Darkness

    The weight of my thoughts pulls at me,
    I think of all the bad and forget the good,
    The pain, the heartache,
    They consume the person I once was,
    Leaving me an empty shell.
    My heart and mind wondering what will be.
    Too much pain,
    All I see is the down side,
    I try with all my heart and soul,
    To find the light,
    And climb from this dark abyss.
    But as I grasp for the edge,
    The pain of my loneliness
    Pulls my back into the darkness,
    Which has become as a whirlpool,
    Pulling me deeper with every stroke I take,
    Losing strength, losing faith
    As deeper into the darkness I fall.
    The weight of the pain,
    Crushing my heart in my chest.
    Taking the person that I was,
    Making me something else,
    Something that doesn’t know,
    How to feel,
    How to love,
    How to care,
    How to be me.
    It all seems to fade,
    Into the darkness,
    As I fall all alone,
    With no one to save me.
    Last edited by freedom; 06-15-2007 at 09:19 PM.
    What lies behind us, What lies before us, Are tiny matters, Compared to what lies within us!

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    Very Lovely...and also quite sad....Thanks Freedom
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    thanks DM
    What lies behind us, What lies before us, Are tiny matters, Compared to what lies within us!

 

 

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