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    What's life

    It's all in my face,
    anger without a trace;
    is life caught or caught to a case?
    But evil resides to the side of the weak;

    stay place stays behind your face and leaks out your eyes,
    only to find deception of a lie
    repenting acceptance of salvation;
    gave up soul without a try,
    the sensation of being out of control gets you high;
    abolition of a sin, taking a toll on your mind,
    breaking patients from a hole in the sky.

    Why ask why? Live in the past of those who die
    true as our as you want to last,
    but in the end,
    life live to die comes too fast

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    Interesting....thanks for the addition...;)
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    thanks again

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    Another fine showing of skill with translation of
    thought to written word.

    No mincing of words as the work gets right
    to the heart of things emotionally.

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    Very nice....keep up the good work
    What lies behind us, What lies before us, Are tiny matters, Compared to what lies within us!

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    thanks again for reading Im glad you guys like it

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    Don't normally read poetry but glad I did this one....well done
    ;om It's nice to be important but it's more important to be nice!!!;om

    ;om And just remember there is no rehearsal for life.;om



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    thank you

 

 

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