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    Smile Soul

    How do I open the door to my soul?
    How do I show you the real me?
    I want to be what you want me to be.
    How can I tell you what I'm about?
    I act hard but underneath I'm soft.
    I'm not what I seem to be.
    If you'd look at me I think you'd see,
    See a different side of me.
    The true me that hides inside.
    Take tiime and actually get to know me.
    Then maybe you'd understand me.
    I'm not as callous and cold as I seem to be.
    Remember looks can be decieving.
    I understand you more then you know.
    The soul behind your eyes I've actually seen.
    I've stopped, looked and learned.
    It's the soul in your eyes that I like.
    Not the color of them or your hair or your body,
    But the soul of the MAN behind the eyes.

    Amanda Sutfin

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    your poems as i read them, seem to take on a soul of their own.

    i'm impressed, Angel
    Last edited by Kai Kenobi; 10-03-2005 at 06:22 AM.

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    Thank you Kai. Your kind words are appreciated! ;)
    What lies behind us, What lies before us, Are tiny matters, Compared to what lies within us!

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    Very good ---Thanks for sharing it with us

 

 

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