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    Surrender

    I gaze deeply into your eyes
    And I can see your very soul
    The hidden passions you have
    So long suppressed

    I touch your cheek
    And feel you tremble
    And I know you desire
    To be touched

    My lips graze your lips
    And you catch your breath
    And I know your need
    That you have kept hidden

    My tongue touches yours
    And the sparks seem to fly
    My arms tighten and
    Pull you closer to me

    I feel you surrender
    Yourself to me
    As you unleash your hunger
    And desires and are finally free

    Free to be you and
    Not have to pretend
    Free to speak out
    And finally feel

    No longer hiding
    Behind words or things
    But open and honest
    For whatever life brings

    Knowing no matter what
    Your do or say
    I will be by your side
    And never go away

    You are surrounded
    By my love to use as a shield
    It is stronger than steel and
    Will never yield

    For anything to hurt you
    It first must go thru me
    Because my love is open
    For all the world to see

    I now share your burdens
    Your joys and hope
    And together there is no
    Problems which we can not cope

    Your tears are mine
    To kiss away
    As you rush into my arms
    Without delay

    You sleep in my arms
    And together we are strong
    For now you know it is
    In my arms you belong

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    That is awesome....you write some romantic stuff there Jolly.....Thanks
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    Amazingly beautiful
    What lies behind us, What lies before us, Are tiny matters, Compared to what lies within us!

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    that poem reached out and touched something deep inside my soul...almost as if you were there or knew me already, Jolly1....that was beautifully written..

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    Dam Jolly, I had no idea you had to poet in your soul. Very well done. Very well done indeed. :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by frozen_north View Post
    Dam Jolly, I had no idea you had to poet in your soul. Very well done. Very well done indeed. :)

    ahhh I have many hidden talents ---known only to those who know me well ---

 

 

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