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    Best of Friends...Chapter. 1-2

    Ok guys I wrote this, it was actually my very first attempt. Althou I have had to edit this it remains pretty much the same. So I hope you enjoy it let me know what you think.

    Best of friends


    Chris and Erin had been best friends since they were young kids. Being the children of parents who were best friends ensured many gatherings and times spent together growing up. Both, being eighteen now things got a little interesting.

    Erin had just turned eighteen two weeks before. She has blossomed into a beautiful young girl. She was 5’2” long brunette hair, slim waist, dark skin complexion a perfect golden tan year round. She also had the most beautiful blue eyes and a perfectly shaped butt to top it off. Chris on the other hand, having played football since pee wee league was nearly 5’11” and very toned and muscular.

    Chris and Erin were best of friends since they could remember. They had classes together at school, and after school would always be at one or the others house to do their homework together. After their school studies they would spend the rest of the afternoon playing together till late into the night with the other neighborhood kids. They would laugh and joke remembering how they used to bath together and how their bodies were changing. Chris would tease her about her boobs, which were just becoming noticeable and say they “looked like mosquito bites”. Erin would usually get very embarrassed and hit him in the arm and tell him to quit looking at them.

    This was the usual for them until one day things changed. Erin’s parents had a business dinner and would be out very late. She asked her dad saying “I don’t want to be lonely dad, can I have Chris over”? And then she pleaded “Please daddy … Please” and she flashed her daddy’s little girl eyes at him and of course her father gave in saying “ok baby girl, just put away the eyes lol…. But you two had best behave and you know the rules about the two of you being alone together in your room.” Erin squealed with excitement “thank you daddy thank you” ran and jumped into his lap and gave him a big hug and kissed her father on the cheek. She then ran to her room in pure excitement that only a child could possess. Her father sat bewildered remembering when she was such a little girl and he knew and had pure hatred and anger knowing what was to come for his little girl and how he knew he was going to have to beat the boys off his little girl with a stick.

    Erin now in her room picked up her phone and called Chris and said “Chris I can’t believe it, my parents are going out tonight and they said you could come over and hang out with me tonight” Chris said he couldn’t wait. Erin then told him to bring his swim suit and that they would go swimming later. She then ran back down the stairs almost tripping and falling. Her dad yelled at her to slow down before she breaks her neck. And of course in her adolescence she just giggled at her father and went and gave him a hug. Her father pulled back from her and gave her twenty dollars and said she could order her and Chris a pizza for dinner. She thanked him and went off to her to choose some clothes to wear.

    Once in her room she stripped down to just her white cotton panties and looked at herself in the mirror. Her nipples were starting to get a bit hard from the cool air. She cupped her hands around her breast and pushed them together trying to make them look bigger. She wished they were big like her moms. And then she looked down and thought what silly little girl underwear and took her panties off. Looked again in the mirror, and looked at her bald pussy. She had just recently started growing hair and has at this point shaved her pussy smooth. She then rubbed her fingers on her pussy seeing how smooth it was. She had just started masturbating a few months ago and loved this form of pleasure.

    It all started few months ago when she first shaved her pussy in the shower one day. She was trying to get a better vantage point and while holding her skin she found her clit and it sent shivers up her spine. She went back and continued rubbing that spot not fully knowing what it was but just that it felt really good. And she kept rubbing in the showers and even got under the bath faucet and let the hot water run on her pussy. But although it felt great and made her body weak she just could never have that first orgasm.

    Now looking in the mirror she sat back on the bed and watched her self in the mirror rubbing her pussy. Her pussy was getting very hot at her touch and wet. And she started thinking about Chris and his hot muscular body... she had secretly had a crush on him for many years now and she always thought of him when she would masturbate. She lay back on her bed and started rubbing her boobs with one hand while the other rubbed her pussy. Erin then wondered what it would feel like to have a dick in her pussy. At this point in her experimenting she had never had anything inside her pussy so she took her finger and slowly pushed it inside just a little bit. And she was completely in heaven she loved the feeling her finger was sending through her little body. She felt something was about to happen in her body but had no idea what, she just felt like pure electricity from her within her stomach like something huge was about to burst. Just that second Erin heard her father knock on her door. Erin was so scared; she looked around and realized that she was lying completely naked as the day she was born, playing with her little undeveloped boobs and her finger buried in her virgin pussy. Her father then said that “we’re leaving and to remember what he had said about Chris”. Erin hollered back “ok daddy I won’t, have a good time”.
    Erin then breathed a sigh of relief, that her father did not just walk in and see what his baby little girl was doing. So having her time so rudely interrupted got off her bed pulled her finger out of her pussy and looked at her finger it was so wet and covered in her juices and she rubbed it between another finger it made her finger so smooth. Then a weird thought occurred to Erin she wondered what it would taste like. She slid her finger into her mouth and it wasn’t that bad at all. It was a little tangy but all together she liked her own taste.

    Erin then got up and realized she had better get dressed and call Chris. She wanted to feel like a grown woman so she pulled out this black thong that she had secretly bought without her father knowing and matching black bra. She went to her closet and chose this little denim skirt that she really liked the way it made her legs look. Then she chose a baby blue shirt with a v neck cut that she showed off her boobs… if they would grow she thought. Erin knew that her father would never approve of this outfit, but she was growing up and finally was having a night alone with the one she had loved for years, and she wanted to show Chris that she was not a little girl anymore. She applied a little bit of make up and she stepped back and looked into the mirror and thought how good she looked and turned around and looked at her ass and she knew she was ready.

    Erin wasting no time at all, called Chris and said “dad left me some money for pizza if you want I will order it while your walking over”. Chris said “that’s great I’m starving, let’s get pepperoni... I’ll see you soon”. Erin said “I can’t wait”. Chris hung up the phone and thought to himself that Erin even seemed a little jumpy, but thought nothing of it. He grabbed his swimsuit and left for Erin’s house. On his way to Erin’s house Chris was thinking about his best friend, but it was not in a platonic thought at all. He kept thinking of how good she looked in her shorts and he would always stare at her ass and try to look down her shirt whenever he could. He couldn’t believe how gorgeous she looked now. His dick began to swell in his pants and he knew that he had secretly been in love with her for years. But he was too shy to ever tell her how he felt, but he defiantly wanted her to be his. He dreamed of her naked body on his while he jerked off many nights.

    Chris finally arrived at Erin’s house and he rang the door bell. She answered and Chris was stunned at how beautiful he looked. He hid his erection behind his trunks in his hand. Erin Stepped forward and gave Chris a big hug and kissed him on the cheek. This was nothing out of the normal for them, but defiantly feeling her little boobs pressed against his chest combined with the smell of her perfume did not help his problem at all, if anything it made his erection stronger. He loved the feeling of her lips on his cheek and he kissed her back and held her close to his body. While he was holding her he slid his hand down and over her butt. Chris loved the way it felt so firm. Erin could also feel his hard dick poking her in her belly, she almost didn’t believe it, and wondered why he was hard but she loved the feeling and vowed to feel more of it.

    They broke away from each other both of them very sexually excited and went inside and jumped on the couch. Erin sat in the love seat and Chris in the sofa. Erin put her bare feet on the coffee table and Chris was just staring and her gorgeous smooth legs. She asked him what the matter was he wasn’t talking. He looked up at her and sort of snapped from his daze. About that time the door bell rang and Erin jumped up from the couch and went and got the pizza. Erin brought the pizza to the kitchen and called for Chris.

    They ate and laughed and joked around but what caught Erin’s attention was Chris kept staring at her. She smiled inside herself so much, and couldn’t help but think Chris liked her too. But she wasn’t sure enough to say anything to him. After Dinner they cleaned up the plates and threw the trash away. Erin then realized it was about 7:30pm and it would soon be getting dark perfect time for a swim. She got up and turned on the outside pool lights and told Chris to go upstairs into the bathroom and change into his swimsuit and then they would go for a swim.

    Chris got up and went to the bathroom. Erin went to her room and striped her clothes off and picked up her new bikini her mom had bought her weeks before. It was white with pink hearts all over and it really allowed her shapely ass to show off. And it really showed off her belly which was flat and tight. She loved how it made her feel so sexy and she knew Chris would like it. While she was changing she thought about Chris in the bathroom right next to her room naked changing himself. She wondered what his dick looked like and how big it was. Her imagination got the best of her and she realized that once again her pussy was wet and that her nipples were getting hard and were poking through the fabric of her bikini which since she didn’t have much boobs it wasn’t staying covered very well. Then all of a sudden, as Erin stepped from her room passing the bathroom she thought she heard a moan. So she stopped and put her ear to the door. That’s when the amazing happened. She heard Chris call her name, but not in a way she was used too. It was much more passionate and then she realized “OMG he’s in there jerking off …and he’s thinking about me”.

    The truth was she loved it. It made her pussy get even wetter then it was on its own. But in true form with how they picked on one another she knocked on the door and said “Chris you better not be jerking off in there” and then ran downstairs. Chris was so embarrassed but was sure she couldn’t possibly know what he was really doing in there. He put his swimsuit on and then ran down stairs after her. When he got to the pool she was sitting there dangling her felt in the pool. He couldn’t believe how the lights in the pool illuminated her body. It made her skin glow. She looked so good and he knew if he didn’t want to let her see his erection, he had better get into the pool now. Chris jumped in the pool right in front of Erin splashing her with water. She was shocked not only by the cold water, but also by her nipples getting hard as little rocks. Erin lifted her butt and slid into the water.

    The two kids splashed around and swam around and chased after one another until Chris caught Erin and picked her up from behind and flung her backwards into the water dunking her. Erin then could have sworn she felt his hand grab her boob and she got weak legged, when Chris picked her up again, this time Erin backed right up against him and she was amazed “OMG I can feel his hard on, on my ass wow its big” then Chris picked her up again and flung her back, but this time when he went to get just a feel of her boob he got his hand entangled in her top and he now felt her boob without the bikini. Her right breast was so soft and smooth yet her nipple was so hard. It was utterly amazing he was finally holding in his hand what he was trying to look at for so long. As he flung her back he let go of her but with his hand still tangled in her top, it took her top off in his hand.

    When Erin came up she felt her top was gone and was a little embarrassed she covered her boobs with her arms. And she screamed at Chris to give her, her top back. Chris just laughed at looked at her and said “what is there to be embarrassed about, come on I’ve seen you naked before”. Erin said “yea, like when we were six in the bath tub, we are not little anymore, NOW GIVE ME MY TOP”. Chris got a devilish smile on his face and then he paused for a second. Erin put out her hand demanding her top. Chris then threw her top across the pool deck and said “Then go get it” and laughed to himself.

    Chris turned to get out of the pool to enjoy the fruits of his labor, when Erin gets out of the pool to get her top. As he was climbing the steps Erin grabbed hold of his trunks and yanked then down. Chris was in such a hurry to get out of the pool he completely stepped out of his trunks. Chris immediately fell back into the water to cover himself. While, Erin swam to the other side of the pool laughing the whole way and flung his trunks out of the pool onto the deck along with her top. Chris said that’s not cool at all. Erin retorted “what it was fair for me to be disrobed but not you”? Chris was holding himself to cover from her view. And got another devilish grin and said “but its not fair Erin, I’m completely naked and you still have your bottoms on”. Erin’s heart was beating so fast, this was the moment she had longed for, for some time. A chance to be naked with Chris, and feel his naked body against hers. This time it was Erin who got the devilish grin and pulled the strings of her bikini bottoms apart and threw her bottoms on the pool deck along with the other discarded clothes. Erin looked at Chris and said “There are you satisfied now”? And in the same time she removed her other arm from covering her breast baring them for Chris to view as he pleased.

    Erin now swam over to Chris slowly. Chris couldn’t believe his eyes, her breast were so small and he loved them. He had wanted to see them for a long time now and now he can see all of her that he wants. He was so aw struck that he just stared at Erin, she swam up to him at the shallow end of the pool and stood up. Erin looked at Chris and said “what you’ve never seen tits before” and splashed him and swam away. Well Chris not wanting to be outdone and swam after her. Finally catching her not long after, he grabbed her leg and pulled her back to him once again picking her up from behind and flinging her backwards under the water and of course getting a good feel of her tits as he did so. But Erin had wanted to touch his dick for so long that she reached behind and grabbed his dick in her little hand she was amazed at how thick it was and hard.

    She then came up for air and both started laughing hysterically and they were just inches apart and just stared at each other and stared into each others eyes. Chris being the less shy of the two moved closer to Erin and pulled her to him and kissed her so gently on her lips. He backed away for a moment expecting to get slapped. Erin licked her lips and leaned forward kissing him once again this time letting her tongue touch his. She had dreamed of this day for so long and it was now that she decided she was going to give Chris her virginity this day and nothing was going to stop her.

    Erin used the water to lift her up and wrap her legs around Chris’s waist placing his dick right under her pussy. She couldn’t believe how wonderful his dick felt sliding in between her pussy lips. Chris was moaning into her mouth now at these new sensations that he had never felt before. Erin knew she wanted him now and said “come on Chris, come with me” took him by the hand and led him out of the pool. Chris dick was so hard it just stood straight out.

    Erin led him to where she had the towels and Chris being a gentleman, took the towel and dried Erin off completely; she loved feeling his hands all over her body. She then took the towel and dried him off spending extra time at his dick. And then she grabbed him by the hand and ran in the house and up stairs. Chris was running behind her and staring at her ass that was right in his face going up the stairs. He loved the way her ass bounced just a little, it was gorgeous. They reached her room and Erin pushed Chris on the bed and turned around and closed the door just in case. Then joined Chris on the bed, and laid right up next to him on the bed. They both were giggling silly but Chris was the first to reach out and started brushing his fingers up and down her body from her should then down to her leg and back up through her stomach and then to finally to her nipple. Erin jumped at the excitement, this time she was letting him touch her and she loved how it felt. She responded by touching him too but Chris wanted to feel her hand on his dick and when Erin’s hand reached his stomach he took it and placed it on his dick.

    Erin looked at him unsure, but Chris just nodded letting her know it was ok. Erin loved how his dick felt so warm and soft yet so hard. Erin’s little inexperienced hand stoked her fingers up and down his skin. It was then, she felt something on her pussy and she looked down and Chris was rubbing her pussy, Erin opened her legs and propped one leg up so he could better access her pussy. Erin was getting so excited she had to stop and she just laid back on her back and let Chris pleasure her. She couldn’t believe it but it felt so much better when he did it then when she touched herself. Erin started bucking her hips and rhythm with Chris’s hand and she was moaning. It was then her heart almost stopped beating, Chris leaned over and said “Erin I love you” and kissed her so gently on her lips. If she didn’t love him before and it was just a crush, that was blown out of the water now.

    Her heart melted and she knew she loved him so deeply at that moment. Erin cupped his face in her hand and said “Chris I love you too so much, I always have” “I want you to make love to me and be my first. I’m going to give you my virginity”. Chris looked at his best friend and soon to be lover and kissed her again. Erin pulled Chris on top of her and opened her legs and let him rest with his dick on her pussy. Chris looked deep into her eyes and asked “are you sure you want this”? Erin simply responded by saying “I’ve never wanted anything more.” “Please Chris, please make love to me”. Chris then rose on his hands and Erin positions his dick with the entrance to her womanhood. She knew that very soon the very last of her childhood ways would soon be torn from her and she was ready to begin becoming a growing woman, but she wanted to grow with Chris and be with him the rest of her life. Chris pushed and just the head of his dick popped into her little pussy. He continued pushing a little at a time till he reached her womanhood. He knew he was going to show her how much he loved her and make her his woman for the rest of his life. Erin grunted deeply with every inch deeper Chris went; she felt a slight stabbing pain deep from within her pussy. Erin knew from the older girls at school that was her “Cherry” and Chris was about to make her a woman.

    Chris looked at her again lovingly and kissed her deeply and thrust with every ounce of muscle he had within him breaking through her virginity in an instant. Erin just bucked her hips up in the air and screamed in pain and tears flowed from her eyes. Chris not knowing said “omg I’m so sorry I didn’t mean to hurt you” Erin said “No it’s ok, you just broke my cherry, just don’t move just let me get used to it”. Chris then kissed each one of her tears and tried his best not to move, but this being his first too he moved back and forth ever so slightly and he couldn’t believe how warm and wet her pussy was. Erin having adjusted to having a dick inside her grabbed his ass and pushed him into her and her pain was gone, now all that remained was pure ecstasy of pleasure. Chris continued thrusting in and out of her little pussy and Erin loved the way he felt sliding in and out of her. Suddenly she felt that feeling she had earlier of an explosion within her and it rocked her entire body. Erin just convulsed and shook underneath her new found lover having the first orgasm in her young life. Erin’s pussy grabbed Chris’s dick like a vise and spas med around his dick and he felt his balls tighten and he knew from his own experimenting that he was about to cum, and cum he did he thrust one last time deep in Erin sank to the hilt and emptied his balls deep in her pussy.

    Erin and Chris lay almost unconscious entangled in one another with Chris’s softening dick still inside her pussy. Chris looked at Erin and kissed her again on the lips passionately that lasted a few minutes. Erin could feel his hot cum swimming inside her belly. She had never felt anything like that before but knew it was not to be her last time. Chris finally got off Erin and his dick made a pop when he left the channel of her loving whole. They lay close to one another cuddling and holding one another in love. Erin looked at Chris and said “I love you Chris with my all my heart and I want to be with you forever like this”. Chris said simply “as you with my dear”. Erin knew exactly what that meant. But realizing the time Erin suggested they take a shower and get cleaned up before her parents returned home. Chris picked Erin up in his arms and loving carried her little frame into the bathroom and started the water and set her down gently and got in himself.

    Erin grabbed a washcloth and got it soapy and started washing Chris’s body under the hot water and used to hand to wash the soap around and of course paid extra attention to his dick and balls, which of course caused his dick to swell in her hand. Chris put his head back against the shower wall and just enjoyed Erin playing with his balls. Then it was his turn. Chris took the cloth from Erin and washed her body and cleaned the blood and cum away from her little pussy then soaped up her little tits and took his hands and wrote the words I Love You on her chest. Both laughed and kissed once again. All this fun had made Chris hard again and he begged Erin to make love to him once more. But Erin knowing her parents would be home soon reluctantly said “Chris my parents will be home soon, and we won’t have time to shower again”. Chris said “can’t we just do it in here so we don’t have to shower again”? Erin grinned and said “you’re bad” and gave in, wanting his dick back in her pussy just as badly as he wanted to. Erin laid Chris down in the tub and then straddled him and leaned over and said “you’re not getting any further unless you kiss me again”. Of course, Chris did not waste any time reaching up and kissed her passionately on her lips and let his tongue dance with hers.

    Erin reached down between them and took his dick in her hand and pointed it upwards and raised herself up and then impaled herself down on his dick until he was totally in. They both grunted and moaned loudly. Erin raised herself up and sat back down bucking her hips up and down. Lord she loved how it felt and was so glad it didn’t hurt like the first time only an hour before. Chris learned up and starting sucking her right breast and Erin giggled and said “that tickles” but very much enjoyed the attention he was giving her breast and she cradled his head in her hand to her breast. Chris was now thrusting into her for all he was worth and Erin started shaking again and said “OMG Chris I’m going to cum again”. And then she started shaking violently and convulsing and Chris knew she was having her second orgasm of her life but this one seemed bigger then the other one. Erin screamed “Oh Chris OMG”. Then Chris felt a large amount of warm wetness hit his balls and looked down and thought “OMG she’s peeing one me” but he didn’t mind in his mind it made it better, he had fucked her until she peed. He laughed to himself for a moment and then realized he was soon to cum again himself and said to Erin “oh god I’m going to cum again” Erin having come down from her orgasmic bliss said “oh yes Chris cum inside my pussy again, Please”. With those words Chris started raising his hips up off the flood in a final flurry of thrust until he started Cumming. Erin pushed herself onto his dick as deep as it would go and she felt it pulse inside her and empty its load deep inside her. The two just laid there Erin on top of Chris kissing and enjoying each other.

    They both washed up and went back to Erin’s bedroom and got dressed and kissed. Erin said “Chris you must go, my parents will be home soon and they can’t catch us or they will know what we did”. Chris kissed her one last time. And Chris started walking out the door, when Erin ran and grabbed him and kissed him once more and said “I’ll be missing you until we meet again” “I love you Chris”. Chris kissed his love back and said “I love you too, and I hope that will be soon”. And he ran off into the dark to return to his house to dream of what he and Erin did this night. Erin ran back up to her room and made her bed and straightened up her room a bit so her father wouldn’t know she broke her promise.

    About twenty minutes after this, her father came home and Erin had already dressed for bed in a long sleep shirt but this time she didn’t wear any panties. Her father knocked on Erin’s door and she said “come in daddy”. Her father poked his head through the door and asked if she had a good time. Erin smiled widely and said “you have no idea daddy, I’m so tired daddy I will go to sleep, see you tomorrow”. With that Erin drifted off to sleep with dreams of her lover. The next morning her father knocked on her door again and said in a stern manner “Erin, why are you’re and Chris’s swimsuits on the back porch”? Erin knew she was caught but lucky for her, her mother blessed her with quick wits and said “daddy we just wanted then to dry so we took them out to the deck to leave them to dry. Her father kind of looked at her out of the corner of his eyes inquisitively and said “ok baby, I trust you. But he didn’t try to touch you or anything did he”. Erin smiled to herself and said “no daddy he was a perfect gentleman, you would be proud of him”. Erin’s father said “ok baby well get a shower and get dressed and come down for breakfast”. Erin said “ok daddy, I’ll be down soon”.

    Her father left and Erin quickly rolled over and picked up her phone and called Chris. Chris answered and said “Erin? Wow it’s early, what’s up?” Erin said “hey Chris, guess what?” “In our rush last night we forgot to get our swimsuits from outside, and my father found them this morning”. Chris couldn’t believe it they were caught and he knew it, he was now afraid her dad would keep them apart forever. Chris said “omg what did he say, what did you say”? Erin said “I told him we just put them out there to dry”. Chris asked “did he believe you”? It then dawned on Chris “omg last night we didn’t use a condom and I came inside you twice, you’re going to get pregnant and then he will know for sure, we are so dead”. Erin laughed at Chris but deep down thought it was cute that he was so concerned about her and said “well aren’t we lucky my mother put me on the birth control pill last year to regulate my period, now you can cum inside me all you want and we don’t ever have to worry about that”. Chris breathed a sigh of relief and said “oh thank god, I was so worried”. Erin said “I know I love you so much Chris, I got to get dressed and have breakfast with daddy”. Chris said “I love you too Erin”. They hung up the phone. Erin’s father hung up the phone in the kitchen and smiled knowing what the two kids had done last night. He knew they were in love and were meant to be together so he didn’t get to upset, and he also knew his little girl wasn’t so little anymore.

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    Very good for a first try. Something to be proud of Adavid.
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    Very good story. For your first, that is impressive. I am not an author, but I don't think I would have changed anything. Look forward to more from you.

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    Thank you very much. I really enjoyed writing it, it was just for shits and giggles. but I may write another one who knows. I just dont have the time to do so lol.
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    Very good story. For your first, that is impressive. I am not an author, but I don't think I would have changed anything. Look forward to more from you.

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    Very good story with a very cute ending.....Find time andrew and write some more for us....hahahaha
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    I would and have been thinking of it. But Im not sure what to write about this time... that really resembled my first time lol being my best friend and all. of course it wasnt exactly as mine happened lol but the idea behind it made me write that. so give me some ideas maybe i could come up with something.
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    Very good story with a very cute ending.....Find time andrew and write some more for us....hahahaha

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    Well you could always expand on that one....take it form where the Dad finds out and go on.....You already have your characters....but then its a first time story....you could make it a part 2 at least.....hahahahah
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    very good story for a 1st time?!?
    i agree you have a nice set up to cintinue that is for sure.

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    Hidden away on the back Page...our very own ADAvid wrote this little ditty....

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    hahah thanx Robin, Glad you noticed and Really enjoyed this. Its my only story so far.

 

 

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