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    poetry contest

    this is my first try with poetry

    An unutterably old lady sits by the fireside alone

    It is the middle of winter, snow falls outside

    No-one has called on her for months

    In her wrinkled hand a photograph


    The girl is smiling, she was always so happy

    The lustrous dark hair tumbles about her shoulders

    So shiny those curls, she must surely have just washed it?

    Eyes bright with the hopes and dreams of youth

    Hers, the prettiest visage God ever contemplated


    Perched coquettishly on the swing

    Something in the pose reveals the chrysalis within

    Not yet adult, her childhood fills its last valise

    Preparing to depart with all its beloved possessions

    Maybe to pave the way for a new owner not yet born


    Girlish tease, flirtatious promise

    Both are present in that sweet expression,

    flared hips and those curved delights beneath her uniform....

    Virginity radiates from her uncomplicated youth

    As sure as breath issues from between those full lips

    That soon will rake the passions of so many young men

    Just one of whom will claim the prize

    And spend his life in praise of being born


    Yet sixteen summers had passed that day

    She remembered her father seated on the fallen log

    As he framed her image in the viewfinder

    Could he have known how much she loved him?

    How much she needed him?


    It was her father that she smiled for

    He that she had wanted, he for whom she could never admit

    to having such unnatural thoughts and desires

    The girl on the swing smiled for the camera


    In another time and another place, an unutterably old lady cries

    .....for probably the last time

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    Wow...that was very nice....Deep and sensitive...I liked it. Thanks
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    so it is a good story
    it was my first try

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    Way to go baboy Nice Tight Imagery liked the Incestuous hint was it ever fufilled I wonder????

 

 

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