Results 1 to 3 of 3
  1. #1
    pervert
    Join Date
    Feb 2018
    Location
    south east asia
    Posts
    3
    Post Thanks / Like

    Hello Everyone (New Stories in My Blog)

    Hello guys,

    New here and just posted an on-going sex story on my blog. If you love stories about Asian girls, bondage, blackmail and sex in general do check out my blog and leave comments if you like the stories. Feedback on it and also suggestions how to continue the writing and the plot would be great. Look forward to hearing from you all!

    Thanks!

  2. #2
    Administrator Erotic Story Forum Perverts
    Join Date
    May 2007
    Location
    London England
    Posts
    2,545
    Post Thanks / Like
    One tip is make your story pleasing on the eye with slightly larger font size and Smaller paragraphs so the reader does not lose track of where they are in the story and besides it will be less of a stain on your story flow. there are some excellent stories on this website and i would suggest you take a look at how someone like Brigit Astar, Groomleader or Mrssimmons45 layout their stories. I am not saying the style of your writing is wrong, only that great stories can be let down because the reader has to concentrate too much on their position in reading the story and not on the story content. Hope this is of use to you.
    ;om It's nice to be important but it's more important to be nice!!!;om

    ;om And just remember there is no rehearsal for life.;om



    Other stories wot I writ....
    There are too many titles of stories wot I have writ to list here but if you click on my name and then select all posting by this person you will be able to see all my work.

  3. #3
    pervert
    Join Date
    Feb 2018
    Location
    south east asia
    Posts
    3
    Post Thanks / Like
    Thanks for the advice! will use it for future chapters..

 

 

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •